TOEFL essay: You have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks

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It is another essay....Could someone also comments and corrects this one, please?

You have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks. Which country would you like to visit? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.

People travel for different reasons. Someone just for holidays, others for work. In my opinion travel means to discover. But if I had chosen a country I would like to visit in a hot country. Near the equator, just because I love the warm temperature. I thought at Madagascar and Mauritius. The nature, the wild life, the forests, the animals. All of them are elements that could create two great weeks.

Personally I rather prefer a different tipe of tourism, I like to know new places, new people, new cultures. And actually coulture it's one of the reasons why a choose Madagascar and Mauritius. But I could just taste the real culture of these islands. The comments of the people that I know and that they have been there are incredibles. Fantastic place, gougeous enviroments, incredible temperature.
Moreover an interesting point about that two islands is the animals. I really interest to see animals that I have never seen before. For example the people all around the world say that the bird DODO it's dead. I wouldn't believe them and I hope it's still alive. It is one of my favourite animal and I really wish to see it else if It could be difficult.

In conclusion I think that two weeks are fews to see a big country and also to feel the essence of a country. However I could see incedible places, I could taste some of their culture and see (if I can...) the animals that I have always dreamed to see.