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A simple composition by my own words...



 
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Profile: I'm Ketty, my surname is Pena. I'm from Colombia. Its capital is Bogota. | Lesson 5: I have also written my profile using the possessives...
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A simple composition by my own words... #1 (permalink) Tue Oct 21, 2008 11:55 am   A simple composition by my own words...
 

What subject you want to speak about: here I am writing now my own words as a simple composition ,however, I want to learn how to writing , please check what I had written then tell me your ideas about the subject .. thank you
Let ‘s speak about flowers , what flower is a symbol of ?
I guess every one have to said it is a symbol of beauty and a symbol of love , but I have to add it is a symbol of a correctable duty and I can say you are doing your duty like the rose , another benefit of flower is that bee gets the honey from it.
Flower needs the air , food, water as you need .
There are many kinds of flowers , the spring flowers , the autumn flowers , the winter flowers and definitive flowers.
Every one of us was planted a flower in his house , and we see the flowers everywhere ; at schools , at churches, at a countryside , at public gardens and in natural . I find the natural ones have the better perfumes.
Sons , adults , young’s girls and boys had to love the flowers , and whom didn’t love it are a foolish mind and didn’t have to worth the life , and it seems to me they were spitefully persons .
And we have to say in our language ; Rose, water and beautiful face.
A one who are musical becomes affected by the flowers aspect and had to great in the tone.
Ones who are writer had to great in his writing by the present of the flower.
Ones who got a sick will be improved, when he was applied by a bouquet of flowers.
Now I have to put questions ending to this paragraph :
1- can you add another symbols concerning the subject?
2- Can you identify the method of linking in the composition ? time order , space order or others ?
3- List 5 of pronouns and its belonged objects ?
4- What is the difference between affect and effect ?
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