TOEFL® essay: Are you organized or not?

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In my room you can't find anything that you left the day before. Because there are lots of trivious things in my room and I can't say that I am an organized man at home. But at office while I am working, I am the best organized man in the world.

People have lots of working characteristics. Some of them are lazy that they do a duty but they wait for the last moment. Some of them are hard-workers that they don't go away without finishing their duty. When you think about these two characteristics, I am in the middle of them. I am not a hard worker but I am not a lazy worker, either. I don't stay at office till midnights to do a duty but I don't wait for the last moment to do it. I am an organized man at office. I plan my duties and make a schedule. Duties that are given to me are never completed after the time my boss wants them ready. As I said before, unlike at home, I have disciplined myself at office and I reached the success by self-discipline.

Last year my boss went to a vacation for two weeks and he gave me some assignments that I used to do in one month before. When he went, I prepared a schedule for myself and I planned every steps. Two weeks later my company would have been checked by government tax inspectors and I wanted to prepare the assignments before the checking time. I worked as scheduled and I got the assignments ready for inspectors. When my boss returned, he felt surprised too much and thanked me a lot. He said ' I appreciate you for your organized working'. That was the woundrous reward for me.

[Kepilik]

can you check my errors?? best regards