How can I improve my writing skills?

[Vigojovanovic]

thats really a great idea for improving writing.
can you correct this:
everybody dreams of being famous like Liam who won a tv show spending on the island for six weeks.

thank in advance

[Kitosdad]

"Everybody dreams of becoming famous like Liam, who recently won a contest simply by appearing on a TV reality show where he/she spent six weeks on a tropic island."
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[Gauravsg949]

Please review this and let me know whether it is grammatically correct or not -

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[Brayden]

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[Brayden]

Ya that's really a good idea. so i am sending my article please correct it.

WINDOWS 7 REGISTRY CLEANER

It is a software tool which scans entire registry and removes all the damaged or corrupted files and fixes the problems. Windows 7 is the latest version of the popular Windows operating system, however as with different versions, it’s still vulnerable and makes the system slow. These are all caused by the ‘registry’ and to restore them, everyone wish to use a ‘registry cleaner’.

The Windows 7 registry is a database repository for information about a computer's configuration. The registry keeps growing when you use Windows. As it does so, it attracts outdated and unnecessary information and gradually becomes unmanageable. With the growing of the registry, it can degrade the performance of the whole system and cause many unusual software problems.

It is very important for the end-user to clean and maintain the System Registry regularly so Windows can give better performance. Manually trying to clean and maintain the System Registry it can result in damaging the system. Regcure is a widely used registry cleaner for Windows 7.

The Windows 7 registry cleaner is a simple tool that can identify and remove the problems from the Windows 7 system. They work by scanning the ‘registry’ which could is the central folder that stores all the settings and files of PC and also for maintaining records for a very long time; however it is also the one which creates problems as well. The problem is that since the registry contains all the settings of system & software, it’s constantly creates minor problems if not taken care properly.

There are several benefits of using a registry repair tool. It helps you to fix several computer-related errors and boost its performance too. It also makes your computer more secure and enhances its processing speed. Some registry cleaning tools display a large number of errors on your computer screen. Many of these errors can be the important entries of your system. You must avoid using a tool that prompts you to delete all such entries. This can be averted if you procure a registry cleaning tool from a reliable source. Use your Internet research skills while selecting a tool. It is a good idea to first use the trial version of the tool, and buy it once you are satisfied with its performance.

The Windows 7 registry cleaner have features like, allowing the cleaner to find and fix the most problematic registry files on system, Advanced Scanning Facility, Complete Backup Options, Lots Of Search Options, An Easy-To-Use Interface, Constantly Updated. From the survey, some of the Best Windows 7 Registry Cleaners are Reg Tweaker, Regcure and before starting the cleaning by the Registry cleaner, it's good to create a backup of the registry. Remember, the registry is the heart of Windows operating system, and thus requires effective maintenance. If you want to keep your pc in a healthy condition, you must keep its registry error-free. This can be achieved by deleting useless data from your system. Therefore, it is recommended to use a registry repair tool that helps you scan, fix, and clean your Windows registry at regular basis and improves your system’s performance too.

[Nguyen Thuy]

I have a problem with my writing assignment. here is my writing about argument paragraph. please help me correct and make it in the right type of paragraph
"There is no doubt that the suitable place for students to stay in is a rented house. In my view, our accommodation should be a rented house for three reasons. A good condition is the first and the most important thing as well. The rented house with a quite atmosphere can help us not to suffer from noise like hostel. Because of this, we can study with the highest concentration and our self-study is surely more effective. Second, the rented house brings us the feeling of independence and comfort as we are in our own house. For example, we own a large room with a modern toilet and convenient facilities instead of sharing limited space with many other students in hostel. Moreover, many favourite dishes that may be cheaper and safer can cook by us. This is many girls’ hobby in particular. It seems to me that living in the rented house gives us many opportunities to cope with life problems. By this, I mean we can have much chance to make many social relations and do a good preparation for future family-life as well. In short, it is better for the students to living in a rented house."

[Sweet.R]

I think its an intersting idea, and we all can benefet from it.
we can even make new friends and have fun conversations.
But I want to ask you all, and hopefully to hear from you, how can I publish my essasy on the website?

If someone can help me, please send me an email to : Crazy.love.remosh@hotmail.com
Thanks.

[Yarselrach]

Hi Guys,

The last post here was last Aug 15, 2005 so I am not sure if this website/forum is still active. I am in search of the same forum that will help me improve my english writing skills...

If this is no longer active I am glad if someone can point me the effective, productive website to learn pracice my english. I am in need of the resources to improve my speaking as well as my writing skills..

[DarkEdition]

OMG Yarslerach, you must be a troll, or moderator in other forum that's teaching English. Or just stupid. This forum is active, you just revived the topic from fifteenth page.

[Linhtuoi]

It is the coincidence which today is my first working day and read the my first day in a new job article of Alan. My first working day has been passing over haft and everything is going smoothly. In this duty meeting in this morning, I was assigned some task one of which is very interesting. In August, my company is going to import a package good and maybe our partner will come Vietnam in this occasion. Naturally, I will in import transaction position. I feel a bit worry because my English is not good. I can’t imagine how I like when I direct communicate with them. Now, I only want to make my English is good right now. Can you help me?

[Samito]

hi everybody.
I am interested in this idea as well because i want to devellop my writing. here is a small composition about writing to start this experience.

To write is not only to express your ideas and transmit information. writing is about style and grammar, which are two elements considerably evaluated by teachers and readers.

Punctuation also needs to occupy a great deal of intention by the writer because it affects the meaning of the whole text. That is to say bad punctuation leads to bad understanding of the message being transmitted From all this we can say that writing actually involve multi skills.

Grammar
Without grammar no language can exist. It is the basis of any writing. To master grammar means to control the language and create opportunities of expressions and conveying ideas confidently.

Style
Is the factor that makes the reader feel comfortable when reading your work.
Style in fact may help you, as far as you know how to twist it like you want, to convince your interlocutor and makes him involved into the text.

[Azizi]

What students achieve while studying Abroad?

The stage of Higher education in a student's life is one of the most memorable,interesting and enthusiastic phase of life.In this new chapter of life the student explore new challenges and truths about social and personal life.Every year thousands of students around the globe spends lots of money to study abroad.These students not only achieve valuable degrees but at the same time adapt to new environments,experiencing different lifestyles and cultures,gaining new ideologies and perceptions towards social and personal life.
Students in this period of academic life tend to know the values of their own country, culture and eventually the taste of living with their family members.In addition, students accept new responsibilities,as some of them may need to work to support their academic expenses.This itself is a great achievement to have an experience of being employee and he/she consequently knows the real value of their own self and struggles.

Thanks to the brilliant idea of writing on this form.I know my writing is accompanied with many mistakes and corrections.

Thank you

[Xuongrongkg]

Hi, when I wirte a essay, I don't know how to find some reason and arrange my ideas. beside,I am afraid or writting because of my grammar. So I hope I can study writting English skill. Thank you so much
Best wish,

[Angelsweety3]

Is this sentence correct :

"why does everyone i consider decent later turns out to be the worst ever ? "

[Ruzbeh]

Hi everyone
I hope someone check this essay and help to improve my writing skill.

Imagine that you are preparing for a trip. You plan to be away from your home for a year. In addition to clothing and personal care items, you can take one additional thing. What would you take and why? Use specific reasons and detail s to support your choice.
It depended to my travel type in that one year. Different travels make different needs but certainly in any case, I will face different situation which are worthy to record them for latter remembrance. The best way is to take their pictures.
It's not very important to be a perfect photographer or to have a professional camera. One just needs to take the pictures for his/her own and his/her taste. One may not need to show them off to everyone.
The pictures will be taken to show us the great times we had, wonderful places we saw, nice people we visited during our travel.
It is possible to recall the memories, remember the sites, sceneries, people, and places and so on by looking back to the pictures taken. It is also possible even to share experiences with others, especially those who for one reason or the other do not get the chance to be on the same place or situation I have been.
On the other hand, when I take pictures with other people who became my new friends, I start new friendship with them. Later on, whenever I look at my pictures I remember all the good friends I have made.
When I take a look at my travel albums, them will recall me during those periods of my life.
In short, I believe all the people love to photograph themselves, because everyone has his/her special point of view in different positions. Each photo can have its unique meaning for each one of viewers. All pictures can remember good or bad events in the human life.
Therefore, I will pick up my camera as a choice in my new travel.
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I have no option but to go....