How can I improve my writing skills?

[Ruzbeh]

excue me!!!!!!
In last tree days nobody come here.
Whats up. Is there nobody can hear me.
Please help me, my IELTS exam date is near.
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I have no option but to go....

[Richard]

Hi,
Frankly speaking, your score would be ...
The more you read, the more you will be able to write.
Please post your essay here:
Prep Forum for the TOEFL® Test and essay samples collection
It would be evaluated. Besides, bear in mind that you should start a new topic to write ...
Best of luck.
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[Ruzbeh]

Hi
Thank you Richard for your instruction.
I think I need to find more friends like you.
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[Richard]

Hi, you're welcome.
http://www.english-test.net/forum/ftopic63759.html#essay_groups_or_organizations_are_an_important_part_of_peoples_lives
Kitos has made some suggestions. Please take his advice, read more, and learn how to use correct grammatical structures. Wish you luck.
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[Ruzbeh]

Hi
Thank you Dear Richard, again.
I believe that my english will improve by using your commands.
If someones correct my mistakes, I will not take them in future.
Yours faithfuly
Ruzbeh
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[Tlsduddl6824]

i want to talk about my dream vacation.
most of my life, my idea of a dream vacation has been to visit New York. I will get enough money to go to New York from working. My dream vacation is very similar to one that I heard from my cousin. She told me that New York was the best place to go shopping and feel a lot of things from different people, places and culture. Since then I have been dreaming to go New York.
When many people think of great vacations, they think about exotic lands and countries they have not seen. Yet, I have liked a big city since when I was a child. I grew up in a city, which is very crowded and splendorous and which will always remain beautiful to me in my memories. I will look out the whole areas, people and stores in New York. It will make me be impressed. The biggest reason that i want to go there is shopping. As most of girls, i really like shopping. i heard from my cousin that she was impressed by a lot of shopping malls which are very variegated and fashionable. Most of stores sold the products cheaper than my country. Even though I spend my whole money, I want to shopping in New York.
I want to spend at least 2 weeks for enough time to actually look around the whole New York City.

[Lorizoel]

I'm still confuse what different of present tense and past tense, what time we use that.

[Jing1213]

This essay is about my experience on the Anime Festival Asia 2010 which was hold in Singapore. Corrections and suggestions are welcomed =)

I went to the Anime Festival Asia 2010 yesterday which is located at the Suntec City Convention Hall 401 and 402. There were crowded with all sorts of people ranging from the locals to Japanese and other foreigners. The first thing which I wanted to do was to take out my digital camera and shoot as many photographs as I wanted. However, there were so many fantastic cosplays and figurines which captivated me. Therefore, I had a hard time deciding which picture should I take first.

After taking most of the photographs, I strolled further into the hall. A Mini Akiba stage appeared in front of me which was surrounded by many spectators. There were just 2 people on the stage at that moment. I was wondering what is happening so I managed to squeezed my way through the crowd and get to the front. To my surprise, there seems to be a photo taking session with the Akiba Idols from the Japan's Akihabara!! But I was disappointed when I discovered that this event is solely for people who had bought the ticket with stage access. After that, I could not stop regretting for buying a normal entrance ticket.

Overall, the entire event was great. There was even a maid cafe in the fair where the customers are being served by all the cute maids. Even though I could not get to try it due to the long queue, I managed to buy few merchandises such as cup, pillow and T-shirts with famous anime characters imprinted on it. Therefore, I have to say that this trip was worthwhile for me after all!!

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[Sultan_Dxb]

hi all my name is sultan and i am from dubai and i really want to fix my english language so i am here today to share with you my essay and i wish that you like it :D

THE MOST IMPORTANT INVENTION EVER MADE I sat high in the sky flying in the plain wonderin about a question i recieved from a teacher at school. the question said " what is the most important discovery or invention ever made?" the answer was ahead of me and it was the television the squared box tv! the television idea was brouht up by a man called marconi who invinted the wireless teleraphyin 1897 and it proceeded by gorey corey and etc.
the tv have iven a hue impact as the time have been passing.the tv have provided the world with comfort and happiness. it have helped people in ettin out of boredom and stress that appears from the hue amount of effort they are puttin in their career.iy had helped people to proceed threw their businesses to gain their living and use them in what they need and want.
television have a hue list in the categorie of advantages and disadvantages. first lets start with our list of advantages. the first advantae of a tv is that you will know every thing happining around the world.in addition to the weather forcast. seconed advantae is thet we will be able to see events 'live'such as football matches tennis matches and even concerets. tv also present lots of scientific prorams which helps in increasing the human common knowledge.also in addition to scientific there is educational which can hep the children and teenagers.etc.

to be completed but please need your comments if its good or no

[Sammara]

hi all,

I am sammara ,new to this forum and i believe this is a gr8 idea and i m with u . well , As of now i can say rather write only thing i will try my level best to write atleast one article or an essay in a day which may lead to much more improvisation in my written English ....

Thanks
Sammara

[Beeesneees]

Hi Sammara,
Welcome to the forums.

The quickest thing you can do which will lead to an immediate improvement (not 'improvisation' which means 'creation without preparation') in your written English is to write using proper words!

Use:
I not i
great not gr8
I'm not i m
you not u
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Cheers m' dears!

[Sammara]

Hi ,

Thanks cheers m'dears for correcting my above mentioned post, it will be highly appreciable if you do the same in future.

[Hashim12atd]

hi guys. I am new here and quite interested in improving my writing skills. Therefore, I am posting a short essay here. All suggestions are welcome. Also tell me my mistakes

TRAFFIC ACCIDENTS
The introduction of traffic wardens has brought a major decline in traffic jams and accidents. But still common people are unaware of the basic traffic laws. Today I want to relate some of the rudimentary rules of traffic. Proper safety equipment is the most important thing. But the vehicles manufactured in the country come with substandard safety apparatus, and the result turns out to be the enhanced rate of traffic accidents.
Traffic signs are also not obeyed by the drivers, which endangers their life and life of others too. Paucity of parking areas impels people to park their vehicles in prohibited zones and footpaths, which in turn creates nuisance for pedestrians.
I would like to give few suggestions as remedial measurements. Traffic laws must be strictly imposed at people on road and the there should be a check at regular intervals. People must be educated about the risks of over-speeding, signal breaking and parking in forbidden areas, through print and electronic media. Suffice parking zones should be constructed near highly commercial areas. The highways should be broadened to possible maximum. The use of damaged vehicles should be disallowed to avoid any possible consequences. There should be separate routes for cargos and carrier vehicles. Also, the animal carts must not be allowed to enter the highway at any cost.

[Anvari]

Dear Torsten

I'd like to practice writing with you to improve my writing skills.
Could you please help me?

to achieve this goal, to improve writing skills , I have a suggestion which is mentioned below:
for every day you determine an easy topic or subject for me and I will write my opinions about it, then I will send for you and finally we will discuss together about my mistakes. after each writing, I would appreciate if you correct my text and say me the mistakes.

I'm waiting for your response about above suggestion. please let me know your idea as soon as possible.

best wishes
Somayeh

[Torsten]

Hello Somayeh,

Yes this is a great idea. As for your first writing assignment, please describe your job including your co-workers, the place you work at and your customers.

Best regards,
Torsten

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