Winged Shadow. Please check for mistakes...

[Nicky_k]

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Winged Shadow.

When I tell something about you
You often say, “No, it’s not true”
But it’s true
Because I know you
Better then you know yourself…

It was a day, when the last leaf fell
I had no reasons to believe in fairy-tale
All my coins hadn’t the other side
And then I met you, one long lived night.

And now…
You walk beside me and I see
Your winged shadow on the snow
Among other ways I know
This is the way it should be.
Thank you that you are
I see your winged shadow shine or dark
You are close to me
Even if we are far apart.

The world is strange and I don’t know why
Kids are playing without The Catcher in the Rye
I didn’t know, but it’s nothing new
All my life before, I’d been waiting for you…