Who knows that from where the river's water which is elapsing coquettishly...

[Volcano1985]

Who knows that from where the river's water which is elapsing coquettishly, dragged and brought this rock here

Can you check my sentence?

[Alan]

Hi Volcano,

My suggestion:

Who knows from where the river water, which is coquettishly lapping, dragged and brought this rock here?

Just a thought - but I'm not too sure about your use of 'elapsing'. This usually has a sense of time passing.

Alan
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[Volcano1985]

How about flowing or streaming ?

[Alan]

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Hi,

Yes, I like it. Try 'flowing'. And one further embellishment: which is flowing in a coquettish fashion.
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[Volcano1985]

Wow great application thank you