Industrial revolution - help

[Guest]

I need help from native english speakers.
my teacher (which doesn't speak a perfect english) wrote an essay about the industrial revolution, and I have to study it.
but i'm not sure about some sentences she wrote... they sound a bit wrong.
If you help me finding the mistakes in this essay, I'll be able to tell my teacher "ha,ha you're wrong!!!" and this will be a great satisfaction for me! Thanks.

My teacher wrote:
It was the passage from products hand-made in home to well-refined products made by machines.

Do you say "products hand-made" or "hand-made products"?
And is it correct to say "in home"? Cause I've always said "at home".
Please help!

[Guest]

I think she was trying to say this.

It was the passage that had hand-made products made at home and well-refined products made by machines.

[Mister Micawber]

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It is difficult to rationalize telling someone else s/he is wrong, if you yourself do not understand what is right.
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[Andreana]