I will blow up the darkness inside me and a brand new human being and a gleaming

[Volcano1985]

I will blow up the darkness inside me and a brand new human being and a gleaming body will cryingly take form on the soil with the fatal tears of my brain

Is it correct ?

[Jamie (K)]

First off, you still aren't punctuating your sentences, so it's wrong in that regard.

Secondly, the sentence is so surrealistic that it's hard to know if it is correct or not.

[Volcano1985]

Is it correct for grammar ? For example 'take form on the soil' ?

[Jamie (K)]

Let's just say it's a weird sentence.

[Volcano1985]

Yes weird but i hope u understand what i wanted to ask