Short story: It was a summer day. The sun was shinning and it was harvest time...

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THE MAGIC ROSE

It was a summer day. The sun was shinning and it was harvest time in the village. People were working in the fields under the reflection of sun. They were very jovial due to the wedding of lovers, Bella and Jack next week. The entire invitation cards are sent. Everybody was patiently waiting for the date of the wedding . The sun was shinning birds were singing as if it was spring time, and people were very excited. Everything was ready and guests started to get ready for that special day. At last that special day came to close. Everybody tells tales about those lovers and become very excited. They talk each other, next week at this time they will be playing drum and horn. On the other hand Bella and Jack were very excited after for a long time suffering from their eternal love and in the end both families agreed each other to get them marry. Both Wealthy and Penniless family were quite very happy with that decision of both couples, though at first they seem not to willing that marriage. Anyway, everything was going in normally well there were no question remained in the mind of people and no any obstacle for their marriage. All of a sudden, Wealthy family, Bella’s parents, sent forth the message to Jack’s family Penniless. The message was about Bella’s elder brother came from abroad and he does not happy with this marriage. Anton, Bella’s brother, is the one who is totally against this marriage. He really feeds malice against Jack. At this juncture, He dreams his past what Jack treats him during his school days. Anton is really very grudger and spoiled juvenile he was not forget any thing that he lived in the past. Thus, he wants to break that promise. The rumors spread in the village. Everybody becomes shocked. All of a sudden changes are going to happen and Bella’s eyes run down fluently as if avalanche run down on a winter rainy day. She burst into tears. She could not manage any one minute more, she goes to her room. She starts to think that the end never seemed to take a start if the event goes on like this. Then she locks her room door and initiates to lament for her eternal love as if the nightingale sing. Her mother tries to keep her nervous but unfortunately she does not put up with her suffering and starts weeping. As soon as Anton sees her sister’s bloody eyes he does not bear her agony and hug her then starts to convince her and serializes many suggestions to her but Bella remains silent. Nothing is able to hear from her mouth.
Anton starts on to describe Jack’s past in merciless way so as to persuade her to cease from him but it was futile. On the other hand Jack suffers from his undying love he does not have power to endure this agony. He sings a song;
My Love like a red rose, that’s newly, spring in June, my Love like the melody, that’s sweetly played in tune.
Once he repeats that impressive quatrain his mother does not put up with his anguish. And he sustains singing under the rose tree where they always meet. Suddenly he sees a nightingale which flies over the tree where he sings a song. Jack comes to life and imagine that merely nightingale is able to find a remedy for my sorrow if not nothing could be done. He comes face to face with that colorful nightingale and starts to utter with him and put in the picture his soreness to him. Even the nightingale does not abide his worry and start on singing. When the nightingale sings a song as if the snow on the mountains set in motion to dissolve even the candle in the dark melts. Penniless family (Jack’s family because of poorness they are called Penniless) decides to call at Bella’s house and tell their son’s bad condition. As soon as they enter, Bella sees and her heart brings about beating like sparrow’s fragile heart and her eyes teem with drops as it were her pupil of the eye swimming in the lake. The poor-fellow face faded away like the waterless flower in summer days. They hesitate what to say and become motionless like a turtle. At last the Wealthy family clarifies the matter, they confront.
At that time Anton enters and comes across Jack and his parents and unexpectedly he loses his conscious. They fall into a bewildered condition as a result of that unexpected event he does. Jack and his parents are in leather and try to get what happened, who he is. At first they think that he may be a madman, but later on they discover that he is her brother who is against the marriage of those lovers. His face turned into red along with he becomes blind as it were the one who really lost his eyes and become blind. For a while he loses consciousness and speaks in a meaningless way.

By the supporting of his parents and Bella he is taken outside. They see all their hopes go up in smoke. Jack has no choice to find a remedy for his agony. He is in fact in a great confusion. Directly he goes to their passion tree impatiently wait his bosom friend nightingale. He starts to sing his elegy. Lastly his fellow sufferer comes. The bosom- friend nightingale as soon as comes, asks him “Do you get any message from her or not? Unfortunately he replies no progress! The nightingale is helpless and thinks over and over to find a remedy for those lovers. Jack starts to pour out his grief. Nightingale does not endure his soreness and suddenly leaves there. Days and nights he always dreams Bella nothing else to do. On the other hand Bella is about to forfeit her hope after few silent days. Whenever her house room is knocked she suddenly jumps from her place and in hopefully expects whether it is a message from Jack or not. No drink and eat for a while she becomes a slim like oak tree. She withdraws into her ivory room and always thinking her sweetheart days and nights like Jack.
One day after for along time their house door is knocked again and Bella’s heart beats over and over as it were it leaps up. One of matchmaker came to pay visit to see a prospective bride. Her parent takes permission and asks Bella. At the same time she expects a message from Jack but unluckily it is not. Her mother talks about that they proposes you as bride. As soon as she heard that word from her mouth, she loses her temper and becomes furious like a lion that he is going to attack. Whenever she hears that words she dies twice time. Her older brother comes to home meets them and his mother mentions about that they come here for asking Bella’s hand in marriage. He is unable to hide his happiness after hearing such things. But Bella’s heart becomes like a stone and she is disobedient. Anton looks blankly and does not understand what goes around after her speech. But Anton’s anger is easily understandable from his fiery face. However, the nightingale was there on the tree followed the events in her house and her brother Anton. He himself keeps on talking and suffers from their pure love and starts to think how I can find a remedy for those helpless loves. He directly goes to Jack and whenever he sees his fellow sufferer he becomes very hopefully. Jack beseeches him in very tragic tone; you are the one who only understand the unrecoverable scar in my heart. He cries out says nightingale over and over, only you. Nobody else even my mother, father and friends only you know.
The nightingale cries and says with his whole heart I would help you and find a remedy for you. For a sudden he smiles and he does not hide his happiness from his face. The nightingale leaves there and Jack, from that day becomes very hopeful. Even her parents does not believe their eyes that the chuckle on his face. Bella has been waiting for Jack but what a pity she does not receive any news from him. She goes to garden and see a colorful bird and talks herself it must be nightingale and for a sudden she thinks this a messenger from my lovely, and his vivid red color profoundly attracts her. She feels that the red color must be Jack’s heart. She watches that beautiful bird. The nightingale becomes close to her and asks her what your sorrow is and Bella pours out her grief to nightingale. He deeply suffers from her grief and he calls upon to Bella to speak. He sees her sufferings from the pang of love as Jack is. At the same time the benevolent nightingale seek for remedy for them. From a time he thinks that he finds a remedy for those lovers. He makes plan in his mind. He thinks there is only one way to persuade her brother and let them marry. Jack is looking forward to nightingale any message from his beloved. He always keeps staying under the tree and impatiently waits his beloved friend. But unfortunately he does not come. In a sudden he is about to lose his hope. At that time he watches red rose and dreams his darling as if it were there. The magnificent vivid color of red rose makes Jack come to life. He picks one of them and smell later put it in his pocket on his left side. He is still hopeless. But for a while nothing progresses. The nightingale at last comes and says that he has no any message from her. And Jack replies;” my whole world collapsed about my ears.” The nightingale says: Here at last is a true lover,” "Night after night have I sung of him, though I know him not: night after night have I told his story to the stars. His lips are red as the rose of his desire; but passion has made his face turn into red like a rose which is fade down in summer, and sorrow has set her seal upon his forehead." And Jack replied to him: You speak as if she is here. I imagine her as it were sitting next to me. You describe my love as a red rose in the garden which I smell all the day. Then He flies over the rose tree and decides to take one of these magnificent red rose.
Swiftly Jack feels something when the nightingale takes the most vivid colorful red rose. Doubtlessly he asks him what you do with that rose. No replies and suddenly flies. Jack murmurs and says the rose which he takes is a sign that gives me hope.
After that he does not say die. He sets his hope on the nightingale. And the nightingale flies over Bella’s house and perch on the tree starts singing. At that time Bella sleeps and dreams. Suddenly she hears his beautiful sound and directly goes to garden. She sees him. Her eyes shine with joy and excitement. Her heart beats over and over. She tells her dream to the nightingale. Her dream is about everything ends happily. Eventually my brother is no longer bearing my agony, and we become happy and live in peace. My sufferings throw away in the air. The nightingale listens intently and says your dream will come to true. Her face for a sudden becomes alive. The nightingale takes out the red rose and gives her. She is in fact very excited and looks bleakly to him. The nightingale says; I have a plan but I need your aid. Bella replies in my whole heart I do. As soon as your brother Anton goes to sleep, sneaks to his room and take this red rose’s juice into his eyes. Bella without thought does her job successfully. The nightingale says that everything is end. But Bella does not get what he means. The following day as soon as Anton wakes up, his heart becomes soft, said nightingale. Bella is looking forward his waking up and wonder if his reaction changes or not. However in a short time he wakes and sees his worthy sister and he burst into tears and pleads her to forgive him. Bella does not believe her eyes and even her ears. She impatiently calls her mother and says my elder brother let me marry with Jack eventually. In that case nobody believes their eyes as well. And the nightingale gives the message to Jack and he does not believe suddenly runs to her. Both of them burst into happiness. Her parents give away a bride, Bella to the Penniless family. They grin from ear to ear with delight and lastly both couple becomes very happy. The nightingale weeps for joy and sings pleasantly. Then he picks up a vivid red rose and gifts them as wedding present. He jumps from a joy and the story of Bella and Jack is over.
Written by Recep İşeri 15.12.2008---27.12.2008