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#2 (permalink) Thu Jan 08, 2009 2:53 am Dear Teachers I need your help to correct my letter as a Ielts letter |
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Hi Alireza, I did a quick revision. Hope this helps. Good luck!
Dear Ms. Jones,
My name is Alireza Mirsepasi, and I am a sophomore who is enrolled in your organic chemistry course this term. First, I am writing to thank you for your excellent teaching in the course.
Second, due to an unforeseen problem that has put me in a grave situation, I recently have been unable to attend your course. Unfortunately, I have to move to another country because of my father's desperate health condition. I am very disappointed since I appreciate the opportunity to take the course and respect your experience.
I would be grateful if you would permit me to study the course materials on my own. I feel I am able to assimilate the information and put it into practice. In addition, I already have read every book you recommended as supplementary reading for the course. |
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#3 (permalink) Thu Jan 08, 2009 13:05 pm Dear Teachers I need your help to correct my letter as a Ielts letter |
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thanks so much Marilynjean, please correct this letter with many thanks. Alireza Dear Mr. Jones,
I am writing to inform you that, due to an unforeseen problem which has put me into a grave situation, I will not be able start my career as a call-center operator at your company.
As you are probably aware, I have been living with my grandmother since my mother died. Unfortunately, yesterday she had a heart attack and her doctor advised her to go the hospital for an operation. Owing to this problem, I have been so busy at least for two weeks. As much I must pass my sincerest apologies for any difficulties related to work that have been involved. I would be grateful if you could consider letting me to start three weeks later than planned. Actually I am very eager to be present at my job on January 15th. I hope to get your approval on this matter soon. I am looking forward to receiving your response.
Sincerely yours, Alireza Mirsepasi |
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#4 (permalink) Fri Jan 09, 2009 19:19 pm Dear Teachers I need your help to correct my letter as a Ielts letter |
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please correct this letter I need your help with amny thanks Write a letter to a publisher in a newspaper, asking to advertise a meeting of people from different countries, you are organizing, explain when, where and why.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to ask you to publish an advertisement in your newspaper on 12th April 2009 for a meeting that I will indicate all of its details as follows:
The meeting will be run on April 27th and finish on April 28th 2009, and the guests can attend to the convention from the entire world without any limitation. The meeting is about globalization . The handout will be delivered on the meeting showing we have both Saturday April 27th and Sunday April 28th morning and afternoon slots and have arranged one speech by professor David Jones(author of globalization is certain inevitability ) that will have beneficial effect on the participants. The venue of meeting is main hall of Tehran university and the cost of two days conference is $500 each person full board. Please advertise it on page 2 in the newspaper with blue colour and big size font and invoice me soon. If you have any question please call my assistant Ahmad Modiri (00982122274940).
Faithfully yours, Alireza Miresepasi |
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