Discussion: I requested to find my grammatical mistakes...

[Hakimuddin]

Hi, Torsten! how are you today ?
let me tell you that this is my second post note on forum. last time when i have posted my note, i requested you to find my grametical mistakes and let me know, in turn i have received a reply that i made two mistakes but where, that i have not been notified. kindly go through my old note as well as current note and let me know my mistakes.

i would appreciate if i can be notified on my Email and if what i have writeen to you can be written in a better way, that also you let me know.

Regards,
Hakimuddin

[Torsten]

Hi Hakimuddin,

You can start by correcting the capitalization errors in your messages. As you know, in English we start each sentence with a capital letter. Also, you need to capitalize the word 'I' and you can correct your spelling mistakes by using a spell checker.

In addition, you should read How can I improve my writing skills?

Best regards,
Torsten
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