help me with the invitation

[Gerald]

Dear Friend,

I have written an invitation to the people and the media to invite them to the funtion as mentioned below.Kindly check if the invitation is lucid enough for the media and others.The invitation runs as follows:

"WE GLADLY INVITE YOU TO THE FUNCTION ON RELEASING OF THE BOOK ON THE LIFE AND WORK OF FR VENDRAME WRITTEN BY FR BARNES MAWRIE AND TRANSLATED INTO KHASI BY LANALYNE FRANCESA DON .

IT IS WORTHY TO SAY THAT THE CAUSE OF FR VENDRAME’S BEATIFICATION IS ON THE WAY AND IF GOD WILLING HE WILL BE THE FIRST PRIEST WHO WORKED AMONG THE KHASI AND JAINTIA PEOPLE THAT WILL BE BEATIFIED BY THE POPE".

PRAY FOR THE CAUSE.

TIME:2.30PM
VENUE:ST JOSEPH’S CHURCH
DATE:31/1/2009

[Mister Micawber]

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You are invited TO THE RELEASe OF "THE LIFE AND WORK OF FR VENDRAME", WRITTEN BY FR BARNES MAWRIE AND TRANSLATED INTO KHASI BY LANALYNE FRANCESA DON .

FR VENDRAME’S BEATIFICATION IS in process AND IF GOD is WILLING, this WILL BE THE FIRST beatification by the Pope of a PRIEST who has WORKED AMONG THE KHASI AND JAINTIA PEOPLEs.

TIME: 2:30 PM
VENUE: ST JOSEPH’S CHURCH
DATE: 31 January 2009
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Native English teacher at Mister Micawber's