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Do you agree or disagree that progress is always good? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Let's discuss about this. Please give together as much useful advices as possible.

[Darkangel12891]

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Topic:
Do you agree or disagree that progress is always good? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Life is continuing without stability. Adjusting to it is what we should do to survive and grow naturally. However, I believe myself that progress is not always good because if he/she makes their success rapidly, they are capable to attach mistake, which can result in bad consequences.
It is undeniable that progress is needed to evaluate our working and it's what we deservedly achieve from the hard-working process. But, there is still a repeated sentence through generations that people learn from their failure, so accepting it, learning from it and overcoming it. With the progress, we should take time to look our surround carefully because the more we progress in life, the more we won't take notice as considerate as the primitive time. For instance this, my brother graduated from a reputable university, he get started his own business and reach quickly successful. He didn't recognize that life is not the piece of cake. He was cheated by his buddy and his company become corrupted lately. What I’ve mentioned is that if we grow too fast, our calm will disappear not a long distant time.
Another aspect is that from risking failure, experience is what will teach us much more efficient than teacher's knowledge. Let's consider this example, my brother attended to a full scholarship and he believably prepared things he thought important. However, resulted from his confidence, he didn't care some tiny aspects that provoked him not to get that scholarship. Needless to say, at another time, he took his experience and won a scholarship after that. Thus, experience is always helpful because it was made from us and no one able to teach us experience that requires us to learn more in life to be succeeded.
To wrap this, repeatedly I would say that progress is not always good because if life is so easy, there won't have winners and losers in life.

[Darkangel12891]

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