 #2 (permalink) Tue Feb 10, 2009 17:33 pm Article: In the attempt of gather information and writings about great... |
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| Gerald wrote: |
| In the attempt of gather information and writings about great personalities, there are many instances of difficulties and protracted birth pangs that were destined to be a great person. |
Does not make any sense: instances of difficulties and protracted birth pangs cannot be destined to become a person. But a person sometimes has to go through difficulties in order to become great.
| Gerald wrote: |
| When the ‘process’ was opened in 2006 many of the confreres and people felt that is it the right time to do so. |
Are conferers not people? In this case who are they?
| Gerald wrote: |
It is at this time that people have started to realize the hard work and especially his sanctity put up by this priest on his missionary works in the Khasi and Jaintia Hills.
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Does not make much sense.
Try writing shorter sentences. Make sure that each one has a subject and a verb. It will help you focus your writing.
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con·text - The part of a text or statement that surrounds a particular word or passage and determines its meaning. |
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 Milanya
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