Sentence: Since for the past 4 years it has never been snowed as it was...

[Chitra1]

Dear teachers,

When can we use "I have been....had been .....has been ...I was aksed.....We been ....We being......I was told .....I have had...and much more ,could you give few examples of the above.

I would be glad if you could correct the following sentence

1.Since for the past 4 years it has never been snowed as it was in this year.....this year it was severe snow shower.
2.just now i told you right!
3.How many times should i say this to you ?
4.Inspite of we telling him repeatedly there is no change in him.
5.For his betterness ,we been repeatedly told him but there is of no use.
6.Its been so many days i did'nt talked to you!
7.how much time does it take to complete?
8.They only told right!
9.How many days it takes to compete?
10.hair cut can be done here......How much time does it take to cut my hair which is a bit long....what is the cost for hair cut?

I would be glad if u can even correct my english written in this mail as well..I'm trying to learn english proffessionally,politely...in a respectful way.Thanks once again,awaiting for your reply.

Regards,
Chitra

[Alan]

Hi,

I have made some changes in CAPITAL letters:

1.FOR the past 4 years it has never snowed as IT HAS this year THERE was A severe snow shower.
2.Just now I told you THE right ANSWER!
3.How many times should I say this to you ?
4.In spite of US telling him repeatedly HE HAS NOT CHANGED
5.For his BENEFIT we HAVE repeatedly told him but IT IS no use.
6.FOR so many days I HAVEN'T talked to you!
7.How much time does it take to complete?
8.They only told YOU WHAT WAS right!
9.How many days DOES IT TAKE to compete?
10.A hair cut can be done here......How much time does it take to cut my hair which is a bit long....what is the cost OF A hair cut?

I would be glad if YOU can correct my English written in this mail as well..I'm trying to learn English professionally,politely...in a respectful way.Thanks once again,awaiting your reply.

Regards,

Alan
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