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#2 (permalink) Mon Feb 16, 2009 14:21 pm Text: The Philippine’s military plans to hire shorter people from now... |
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{Could} you please correct the text below and choose {between} the options in bold?
The {Philippines'} military plans to hire shorter people from now on.
According to the new law, {even} people {shorter than} 152 cm are eligible for / qualify for {both correct} {joining} the army. According to the authorities, one reason behind/for {both correct} the change of structure is the fact / lies in the fact {both correct} that the people of {their: because the authorities are talking} country are not {very tall}, and placing {height} restrictions may deprive the military of people {who are short} but {have} high skills. A military official said: unfortunately there have been numerous cases, until now, {where} skilled people have {applied for} the army, {who}, however, failed to be admitted just because of not meeting {body} height standards. In the Philippines {"the country" also means "rural areas", that's why it is better avoided here}, both men and women can join the military service / serve in the military {both correct}. |
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Cerberus™ I'm here quite often ;-)

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#3 (permalink) Mon Feb 16, 2009 16:09 pm Text: The Philippine’s military plans to hire shorter people from now... |
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Thank you very much indeed, Mr Cerberus for your help.
Best wishes. |
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Majid72 You can meet me at english-test.net
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#4 (permalink) Mon Feb 16, 2009 19:04 pm Text: The Philippine’s military plans to hire shorter people from now... |
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| Majid72 wrote: |
Thank you very much indeed, Mr Cerberus for your help.
Best wishes. |
Don't mention it. By the way, I added one more correction: "applied for" instead of "enrolled in", since they were not actually enrolled - they were rejected before they would have been enrolled. |
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#5 (permalink) Wed Feb 18, 2009 12:43 pm Text: The Philippine’s military plans to hire shorter people from now... |
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| Oh yes, thank you for your attension. |
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Majid72 You can meet me at english-test.net
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#6 (permalink) Fri Feb 20, 2009 18:39 pm Text: The Philippine’s military plans to hire shorter people from n |
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| Cerberus™ wrote: |
{Could} you please correct the text below and choose {between} the options in bold?
The {Philippines'} military plans to hire shorter people from now on.
According to the new law, {even} people {shorter than} 152 cm are eligible for / qualify for {both correct} {joining} the army. According to the authorities, one reason behind/for {both correct} the change of structure is the fact / lies in the fact {both correct} that the people of {their: because the authorities are talking} country are not {very tall}, and placing {height} restrictions may deprive the military of people {who are short} but {have} high skills. A military official said: unfortunately there have been numerous cases, until now, {where} skilled people have {applied for} the army, {who}, however, failed to be admitted just because of not meeting {body} height standards. In the Philippines {"the country" also means "rural areas", that's why it is better avoided here}, both men and women can join the military service / serve in the military {both correct}. |
Hi Mr Cerberus I would appreciate you If explain to me the reason why you used "where" in the sentence: unfortunately there have been numerous cases, until now, where skilled people have applied for the army ..... Why not " that" OR "which"? As far as I know" where" is used for places. Best wishes. |
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Majid72 You can meet me at english-test.net
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#7 (permalink) Sat Feb 21, 2009 0:49 am Text: The Philippine’s military plans to hire shorter people from n |
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"Where" is used for places, but it can also be used instead of "in which". Here, it is a figurative kind of place. You say "in this case": you use "in" figuratively, since it is not really in an object. In this case, "that" would be wrong because the relative pronoun/adverb refers back to "numerous cases" and must represent "in these cases" (you would replace it with "in these cases" if you had been forced to end the previous sentence with a full stop). In other words, the relative pronoun or relative adverb functions as a figurative place in this subordinate clause. |
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#8 (permalink) Sat Feb 21, 2009 15:27 pm Text: The Philippine’s military plans to hire shorter people from n |
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| Cerberus™ wrote: |
"Where" is used for places, but it can also be used instead of "in which". Here, it is a figurative kind of place. You say "in this case": you use "in" figuratively, since it is not really in an object. In this case, "that" would be wrong because the relative pronoun/adverb refers back to "numerous cases" and must represent "in these cases" (you would replace it with "in these cases" if you had been forced to end the previous sentence with a full stop). In other words, the relative pronoun or relative adverb functions as a figurative place in this subordinate clause. |
I got it .
Thanks a lot. |
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