What do you think of this? (preparing for the talking part of the TOEFL®)

[Nosayr]

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Hello,

I am preparing myself for the talking part of the TOEFL and for a mini school lecture as well, twofer.
I have uploaded the lecture and I am currently waiting for harsh criticism. I need it.

Thank you for your time,
Nosayr Yassin

[Tom Kane]

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Hello Nosayr,

This is Tom Kane writing. Please forgive me if I am not pronouncing your name correctly. Torsten asked me to take some time to listen your recorded post.

I must honestly tell you, there is no harsh criticism at all! As a matter of fact, I am quite impressed. Your lecture appears to be well thought out. While I don't know about the subject matter to offer an opinion on the topic of your lecture, your message is clear and consise. Well done! If I had noticed any small detail, it would be to speak just a tad slower in certain areas.

Good luck and again, very well done!

Regards,

Tom