Do you have a poet in you?

Ilyas_Kashmiri · #1 (permalink) Sat Feb 28, 2009 18:40 pm *Do you have a poet in you?*

My soul is yours, treasure it within your heart. For surely as the night follows day one day you will wish to part. But my soul will be yours to take with you in the hope that it will grow and bathe in your love Forever, we are hiker through eternity and never the rising sun will ever find us where sundown lost us...

Ilyas_Kashmiri · #2 (permalink) Sun Apr 12, 2009 1:03 am *Do you have a poet in you?*

Ok lets see if I can help you guys to write some thing poetic after all we all are here to improve our English and why not enhance the poetic part of the language too.

Does anyone remembers their child hood nursery rhymes?

I know twinkle twinkle little star
I know Baa Baa Black sheep
I know Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall
I know jack and jill went up the hill
I know little jack horner
I know itsy bitsy spider
and a few more :D :D :D
So come on and post your favorite child hood poem or a nursery rhyme?
if its in your own language then write it in original language and then translate it in English.
P.S. If anyone wants to read any of the above mentioned poems or rhymes please ask me I will be glad to write them down in full length.

Kitosdad · #3 (permalink) Sun Apr 12, 2009 5:57 am *Do you have a poet in you?*

Good morning Ilyas ...... oooohhhhhhh, you are letting your grammar slide away.

Have to give you a yellow card for this mate. Others are reading, and are supposed to be learning. :o :o Don't lead them astray.

Kitosdad.
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Ilyas_Kashmiri · #4 (permalink) Sun Apr 12, 2009 17:26 pm *Do you have a poet in you?*

Hey Kitosdad can you please tell me where my Grammer is not proper :oops: ? I thought I did a better job from the privious postings. :? Please help me correct my mistakes so I don't keep repeating them over and over again.
Thanx in advance.:D

Sahid59 · #5 (permalink) Sun Apr 12, 2009 18:46 pm *Do you have a poet in you?*

Kitosdad · #6 (permalink) Sun Apr 12, 2009 19:41 pm *Do you have a poet in you?*

OK, let's see if I can help you guys to write something poetic, after all we are here to improve our English, so why not enhance the poetic part of the language too.?

Does anyone remember their childhood nursery rhymes?

I know Twinkle twinkle little star.
I know Baa baa black sheep.
I know Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall.
I know Jack and Jill went up the hill.
I know Little Jack Horner.
I know Itsy bitsy spider.
And a few more, Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy.
So come on and post your favorite childhood poem, or a nursery rhyme.
If it's in your own language, then write it in original language, and then translate it into English.
ps. If anyone wants to read any of the above mentioned poems or rhymes, please ask me. I will be glad to write them down in full length.

Hmmmm ! Need I say more.?........ and, no more Thnx...... Thanks.

:) :)
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Sahid59 · #7 (permalink) Mon Apr 13, 2009 2:41 am *Do you have a poet in you?*

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Thanks for your great effort to correct the language to make it legitimate...

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Ilyas_Kashmiri · #8 (permalink) Mon Apr 13, 2009 15:58 pm *Do you have a poet in you?*

Ok I got it; “Childhood” is a one word and so is “Something” and instead of remembers it is remember.
Thanks guys for correcting my language. :D
Sahid59 are you a palmist? Do you believe in stuff like this?

How about "Better English tomorrow." :D

So where are the poems Guys? Come on Kitosdad you and Sahid59 must know some good ones please share with us.

Kitosdad · #9 (permalink) Mon Apr 13, 2009 18:01 pm *Do you have a poet in you?*

Ilyas, my poems are in a similar vain to yours, but more " down to earth."

Destiny. A lovers thoughts.

No-one can change, what is destiny.
Can't re-arrange, what is meant to be.
Things that have since happened,
And things we still don't know,
Were written in the sands of time,
Long, long ago.
We had to meet, that was destiny,
And what had to be, simply had to be.
Now, I have the answer,
I possess the key.
Here in my heart ,
I've found my destiny.

Not good, but eh, I'm an old guy.
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