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Sentence: Sometimes, I feel that I'm not even near the same person... #1 (permalink) Sat Mar 07, 2009 6:01 am   Sentence: Sometimes, I feel that I'm not even near the same person...
 

Could anyone please shed some light on my sentence?

Here's my sentence:
Sometimes, I feel that I am not even near the same person online as I am in real life.(What is intented is: I behave in very different ways between life online and real life.)

Will it sounds better if I say:
Sometimes, I feel that I am not even near the same person when I am online as I am in real life.

Please correct me if you find any mistake in my post. Or have you got any alternative suggestions? Many thanks. :) Have a nice weekend!
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Sentence: Sometimes, I feel that I'm not even near the same person... #2 (permalink) Sat Mar 07, 2009 9:12 am   Sentence: Sometimes, I feel that I'm not even near the same person...
 

Infin1ty wrote:
Sometimes, I feel that I am not even near the same person online as I am in real life.


Sometimes, I feel I am far away from Infin1ty...the distance seems infinite ;)
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Sentence: Sometimes, I feel that I'm not even near the same person... #3 (permalink) Sat Mar 07, 2009 9:36 am   Sentence: Sometimes, I feel that I'm not even near the same person...
 

Gray wrote:
Infin1ty wrote:
Sometimes, I feel that I am not even near the same person online as I am in real life.


Sometimes, I feel I am far away from Infin1ty...the distance seems infinite ;)


Thank you for your modification, Gray :shock: I'm impressed beyond words. You are so funny. :) And definitely your sentence sounds much better than mine. :D
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