TOEFL® essay: Use your knowledge and experience to solve problems or to turn...?

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We are living in a quickly developed society, thus, many people think that we should make decision quickly to keep up with its progress. However, others hold opposite view, we should spend more time to make decision. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the later idea because of two reasons as follows.

The first reason, it is the best way to make decision accuracy is that we have to spend a mount of time to think carefully before making it. In our daily, we have to face many difficulties and a precise decision can help us overcome that time. Sometimes, can this decision can determine our failure and success. Therefore, taking time to think watchfully will help us make suitable and wise decision.

Another reason I agree with later point is that I believe that spending more time on making decision will help us have more time to prepare and maybe find an appropriate approach. Since, careful plan and deliberate arrangement will discovery the errors and mistakes which could exist in everyone’s thought. And this is precondition avoid trivial mistake and to achieve success.

However, just as a coin have two sides. A quick decision helps us catch up opportunities, which are very rare in modern life. We are living in information era, and all people all try their best to keep up with this development. Therefore, making decision rapidly is the best way to succeed in developed society.

All in all, a quick decision or care decision brings to us many benefits. But from my experience, a good decision should base on wise and careful thought

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