Sentence: In protest against not completely making Hindi as the national language

[Kochu]

" In protest against not completely making Hindi as the national language, Dr Chandrasekharan Nair and other members of KHSA goes on fasting". this is a caption of one photo. Is the sentence consrtruction correct. The idea is that some people fasts in protest for not not making the hindi language the national language completely

[Kitosdad]

" In protest against not making Hindi the national language, Dr Chandrasekharan Nair and other members of KHSA go on fast"/ or start fasting.
( A headline .)

This is a caption accompanying a photo. Is the sentence construction correct.?

The idea is, that some people fast in protest at not making the Hindi language the national language .

The idea is, that some people fast in protest at not making Hindi the national language .
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[Gray]

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As it has surfaced here, I would like to know if we can use the article 'the' before 'Hindi'? It confuses me a lot.

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Also, can we remove one of the 'language' words? --

The idea is that some people fast in protest at not making Hindi language the national language.

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The idea is that some people fast in protest at not making Hindi the national language.
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[Kitosdad]

Hi Gray, I have already edited the post to the form that I would choose to use.

Both bold text show the way that I would write the article.
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