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 #2 (permalink) Fri Mar 13, 2009 5:14 am How to express 'start a new business' in other ways? |
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The first two are metaphors, they are not common idiom but are all right as such; the last seems plain and fine. I have corrected some minor errors.
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Corsair, the industry's leader [there should be only one leader, or: an important player - (I do not believe Corsair to be the uncontested leader in memory business)] in modular memory production, [comma] is stepping into PC chassis business.
Corsair, an important player in modular memory production, is setting foot in PC chassis business.
Corsair, an important player in modular memory production, is getting involved in PC chassis business. |
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| #3 (permalink) Fri Mar 13, 2009 5:23 am How to express 'start a new business' in other ways? |
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| Cerberus™ wrote: |
The first two are metaphors, they are not common idiom but are all right as such; the last seems plain and fine. I have corrected some minor errors.
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Corsair, the industry's leader [there should be only one leader, or: an important player - (I do not believe Corsair to be the uncontested leader in memory business)] in modular memory production, [comma] is stepping into PC chassis business.
Corsair, an important player in modular memory production, is setting foot in PC chassis business.
Corsair, an important player in modular memory production, is getting involved in PC chassis business. |
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Thank you for your correction(s?) and suggestion(s?), Steven. :D
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| #4 (permalink) Sat Mar 14, 2009 7:36 am How to express 'start a new business' in other ways? |
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Alternatively, I could also say: Corsair, an important player in modular memory production, is entering(or enters?) the PC chassis bussiness/market. Am I rignt?
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