Sample essay writing for TOEFL®: Believe everything that you read in newspaper

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? You should not believe everything that you read in the newspaper. Use specific reasons and examples the support your opinion.

Newspaper is medium by this you can come in contact with other part of the word. In many area of world there is no facility of television like India. Many villages do not have electricity so they can not watch television and not come in contact with other world. In this villages newspaper work as contact media so newspaper is only medium by which they can collect information about world.
However all information in the newspaper are not correct so I agree with this point that ‘’you should not believe everything that you read in the newspaper’’. In this world there is also competition between newspaper agencies. Sometimes to make a victory on other newspaper they stand a fraud case and by this way they can sell many print of newspaper and make money. But when this case is open the whole thing becomes a clear but it gives negative image on the people who read it. In today newspaper there are many advertisement, this advertisement not usually true but newspaper get money by printing this advertisement, they never think what influences people get. Many newspapers have much case that influences people mind in negative way like rape cases, homicide cases in which son kill father or family member for property, gang war, sexual harassments and many more. Newspaper has also given future data which not true for every people. Example my friend suggests me to read newspaper for astrology and once I read it. They write that your work will not obtain success and that day my result come out and I worried about it because my friend says me astrology never tell wrong but I am not believe on this future and I got first class and first in my class. That day I decide that I should not believe everything that I read in newspaper. In one newspaper a famous story that “God Ganpati drank Pepsi, milk, water In India”. Every people go to temple and try. In this incident many people are dying because of crowd.
Finally by my experience I conclude that you should not believe everything that you read in the newspaper.