TOEFL® essay: Advertising is having a bigger influence on our daily loves.

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It seems certain that a number of people have formed an unrealistic picture of adverting and they have been regarding advertise as more negative effects on our mind, however to other side of picture is quite the opposite, the information I have collected over the past several years makes me believe that nothing is further from the truth them this opinion.

My first consideration is that advertisements provide the most direct comprehensive and detailed information. Daily life needs advertisements because the major function of advertisement is to give all sort of information on commodities, services, employment, student enrolment and even marriage. What’s more, only advertisement can save out time and to make it possible for us to compare and contrast the qualities of different products supplied in the market and to purchase the best ones at reasonable prices.

A more essential factor why I advocate the argument is that advertising itself is a business that has provided a great number of job opportunities. It has become one of the most of stimulating factors that boost the prosperity and development of newspaper, commercial radios and TV station. No one can imagine what’s our life will be without the benefit from advertisement and the goods to the company. A lot of interesting and company’s gross benefits will be lost for the appearance of advertisement.

Last but no least, many advertisements are full of highly artistic values, witty slogans and fantastic pictures. By watching these cheerful and meaty advertisements not only can we get relaxed and entertained, but we can get enlightened and educated.

Although it cannot be denied that advertisement are never without their demerits such as cheating information exaggeration of products functions and so on, their merits obviously for outbalance their demerits. Their demerits can be removed step by step when some feasible measures are adopted. Thus it is no overstatement to say that a life without advertisement is inconceivable to a modern person.