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Sentence: Please modify/correct/rebise my essay in red colour.



 
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Sentence: Please modify/correct/rebise my essay in red colour. #1 (permalink) Tue Mar 17, 2009 8:45 am   Sentence: Please modify/correct/rebise my essay in red colour.
 

Hello everyone,

I would like to know if it is proper for me to say: please modify/correct/revise my essay in red colour.

I mean to say: please point out(or spot?) the mistakes in my essay, and write down your corrections in red colour. I hope I could make it clear to you.Very Happy What will be your suggestion to make my sentence sound better if it doesn't make sense to you? Thank you.
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Sentence: Please modify/correct/rebise my essay in red colour. #2 (permalink) Tue Mar 17, 2009 9:52 am   Sentence: Please modify/correct/rebise my essay in red colour.
 

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It would be clearer to write 'please use red to indicate corrections/modifications/revisions to my essay'.
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Sentence: Please modify/correct/rebise my essay in red colour. #3 (permalink) Tue Mar 17, 2009 9:55 am   Sentence: Please modify/correct/rebise my essay in red colour.
 

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