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The use of a comma in direct speech... #1 (permalink) Wed Mar 18, 2009 19:19 pm   The use of a comma in direct speech...
 

Hi

I just finished a novel by an American author. One of the things that caught my attention was the use of a comma at several places before the adverb in direct speech. Please see:

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She said, sadly, "I really don't know what you are talking about!"


...and there were many, many instances like this. However, there were several sentences also where there was no comma. Like:

Quote:
He said enthusiastically, "...."


Could you please shed some light on this?

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The use of a comma in direct speech... #2 (permalink) Wed Mar 18, 2009 19:46 pm   The use of a comma in direct speech...
 

I am no expert, but I believe such commas are placed to put special emphasis on characters' feelings.
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The use of a comma in direct speech... #3 (permalink) Wed Mar 18, 2009 19:55 pm   The use of a comma in direct speech...
 

SkiIucK my friend, as you rightly say, the comma makes all the difference to the way the text is read.
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The use of a comma in direct speech... #4 (permalink) Wed Mar 18, 2009 19:58 pm   The use of a comma in direct speech...
 

She said, sadly, "I really don't know what you are talking about!"

I also think that the exclamation mark should not have been used at this moment.
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The use of a comma in direct speech... #5 (permalink) Thu Mar 19, 2009 23:50 pm   The use of a comma in direct speech...
 

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I'd say it is the author's choice. Sometimes he wishes a pause for consideration. It may also be period style. I have noticed that James Boswell, in his Life of Johnson, places a comma before all 'that'-clauses.
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