TOEFL® essay: 'Never, never give up', have any one support it with me...

[Darkangel12891]

040: The expression “Never, never give up” means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

On the whole, life is a chain of difficulties in which people’s perseverance would be well-trained. We have to go though such those difficulties to achieve our goal considerably. As mentioned, I totally agree with the statement” never, never give up” that we should keep trying and never stop working for our goal, which thanks to our aspiration and hopefulness.

Initially, our life will become less meaningful without aspiration. Each of us truly has dreams-even it is big or small-that requires us to persistently pursue our goal. Difficulties and failures are somewhat inevitable. Until you spread your wings, you will have no idea of how much you can fly and recognize that the only real failure is failure to try. I used to dream to study in American when I was young. However, I studied badly as I feel disappointed and my mind was full of dissatisfaction. However, at the period of time I was at the end of grade ninth, i realized that I had no way to escape it and I must reach my goal so as I began to study hardly. Surprisingly, I passed on my final exam with a high score among my opponents as if I were dreaming myself. Thus, I convincingly state that all our dreams can come true if we have the courage to pursue them.

After that, from the beginning to the end of life, we went to school and participated with our other friends till we were mature to fight against the world. Our value and position in society is whatever must be proven by us for it is our justification for living. Consequently, willingness to succeed in life is very important as it provides us power to never give up our dreams.

Finally, I again myself would say that there are no failures unless we won’t dare to try. Therefore, “never, never give up” is a very meaningful slogan to each of us to inspire us to perseveringly catch our achievement.

[Xixinh]

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