The prey... (real story)

[Jamilion]

As usual, he started his car angrily due to this job which forces him to open his eyes on the ringing of clock which it is timed out on six and a half.

But very soon the jollity filled his face when he noticed her standing on the road waiting the bus to bring her to school , it was a test-days..

His heart blew strongly like a hunter was surprised by a prey. he quickly took a piece of paper , and wrote his mobile number and then approached beside her with his car.
He opened the right-window to throw out the paper, and indeed, that what he really did.
The paper fell down before her feet as he presses on pedal of speed, and as soon as he disappeared.

Mixture of feelings and thoughts filled his mind and heart as he was getting away from the place in which he threw his suspect paper. he had met her a month ago , in that short moments she looked at him with her honey eyes in which he read a kind of admiration for him..
So that he was optimistic that he sooner or later will hear her supposed wonderful voice tune.. And to support his wonderful dream, he decided to return to that place again so as to make sure that she really picked up his paper. when he reached the area he didn't find the girl in her place , so he guessed the bus came and took her, therefore his interesting was to look for that paper. he actually was looking for a thing that he hope not to find it.

He drove slower and slower sweeping the area for that paper which he unfortunately found it under the force of wind which was playing it as if it an empty can. " oh she ignored my paper!"

At the time of which he stopped the car to get back his unlucky paper, he suddenly found an old woman standing exactly near by the closed window of his car. She asked him to open it by waving her hand. And the real sudden came when he found the beautiful little girl was standing behind her.
Oh my god, this not my happy day, what shall I do now?!
He open the window with a pale face and the sweat started to move over his forehead.

"Sorry my son! My daughter missed the pus today and I would be grateful if you take her to school , as you know it is test-days".

"Oh don't worry mom, don't worry, I will do that gladly".

"Thank you my dear, and this is some money for you.."

He refused the money strongly:

"No, no need money mom!.. the school is on my way".
She repeated her thanking as she opened the rear door for her beautiful daughter who obviously hadn't said a word to her mother about his previous action.
The shy girl sat down quietly and the door had been closed again.
"What a strange thing is happening to me today, he said, a minutes ago I didn't dream of more than that she looks at me, and that will be enough to make me melt as a piece of ice under the sun. and my attempt with her, was an angle without bait . so if any fish stuck in it , that not means more than a hit of luck.

She is with me now in the same car and no body else. But where are the hunter feelings gone , the feelings of hunter who doesn't believe in loss . I don't feel any thing but to bring her to school as soon as possible before she miss her exam. So how the prey turned into deposit?!.

Jamil

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i hope there is a good one who will correct the incorrect words and sentences
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We are always looking for a miracle but the things we are used to seeing are more miraculous than those we are looking for.

[Gray]

Hello Jamil,

It was a touching story. Was that you hunting for the prey?

One more thing --

I hope there is a good one who will correct the incorrect words and sentences.
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First lesson - English, not english. I, not i. ~A student of English

[Jamilion]

Yeah...every one , man or woman has a hunter lives inside him... and i'm one of them.

thank you gray...

Jamil
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We are always looking for a miracle but the things we are used to seeing are more miraculous than those we are looking for.

[Gray]

Hey Jamil,

I insist on being correct because many learners (including me) read it, so please be cautious

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Yeah...everyone, man or woman, has a hunter living inside him...and I'm one of them.

Thank you Gray.

Jamil
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First lesson - English, not english. I, not i. ~A student of English

[Jamilion]

thank you.. that's why I'm here

have a nice time Gray.
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We are always looking for a miracle but the things we are used to seeing are more miraculous than those we are looking for.

[Gray]

[Jamilion]

Let me shake your hand for your amazing patience

Thank you..

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I'm afraid of your comeback again
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We are always looking for a miracle but the things we are used to seeing are more miraculous than those we are looking for.