Dear teachers: I'm Mehran and I'm from Iran. I'm 26 and live in Esfahan...

[Mehran]

dear my teacher
i 'm mehran and i 'm from iranyou know , i 'm 26 and live in esfahan .i want to learn english from your team and i was wandering if you could help me.
i attempt to do every thing you say and i really need to your help
beast regards
mehran

[Kitosdad]

Dear teacher,
I'm Mehran and I'm from Iran . I'm 26, and live in Esfahan.

I want to learn English from your team, and I was wondering if you could help me.

I will attempt to do every thing you say, and I really need your help.

Best regards,
Mehran.

Mehran, study the edited text, and note the capital letters used. Note the " I " when talking about yourself. Note the additional commas, to add effect to your words.

Your spelling is very good. I think you are doing really well.

Kitosdad.
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