TOEFL® essay: The Internet is the most important invention ever.

[Helen111]

Many people say that the Internet is the most important invention ever. Do you agree os disagree with this and if not, what do you believe to be more important? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

What Like Would Be Life Without Internet?
Many people say that the Internet is the most important invention ever, and I definitely belive that it is true. Since the first arteficial satellite, the Sputnik ,was launched to the space, the world has never been the same. Nowadays computer is so affordable that in every home you can find one. What is more, the Internet connects people all around the world, and allow to make on-line businesses transactions and prove a special kind of education.
Computers did not exist a century ago and people had happy lives without them . Nowadays, we take computers for granted and nothing can exist without them .Life would stop without computers. You wouldn’t even think how many common products are operated by computers. Our cars, microwave ovens, wristwatches and tousands of other gadgets.
Appearing the Internet you can search on www – means World Wide Web – for information when you have to some. There are millions of websites storing an endless number of data. You can find many dozens of information about everything on the Internet. E.g. History, Animals, Plants, Nature, Music,famous people etc. There are countless of services available on the net. What is more you can download music, films, listen to foreign radio stations, play games, read and subscribe newspapers and magazines and you can even purchase or sell various products , order food,. In addition you can transfer money through the Internet, and learn languages on-line on several web pages and practise English because most users speak the language. You can keep in touch with friends or other people from other countries to write them e-mails if you have an e-mail access and it is very fast .The list is endless, and I honestly like to use it because as I have experienced I always get to useful information through the Internet ,e.g.practise my English and gain knowlede about healthy life. And luckily, I also have some good experience in connection with bying products on the Net. Thus, it always contributes for my life with a benefitial way.
In conclusion, the above mentioned reasons I strongly beleive that it is evitable nowadays to use the Internet. All in all besides entertainment using Internet is not only a pleasure pastime but also a way of education and also a workplace which let us to live a more convenient life. If you have a small laptop or a notebook that you can take anywhere , it is like an office in your briefcase,and it is very comfortable and saves you a lot of time. And if you use it only with awereness and only for its advantageous and positive aspects than you will be sure that it serves your development for a better life.

[Kitosdad]

Hello Helen, you've written quite a good essay here, but I get the impression that you have only skimmed through the second reading before posting it.

There are quite a few errors, but I must say, nothing of real importance. Perhaps you were disturbed whilst composing this essay, and lost your train of thought.

However, if you really wish to be an excellent essay writer, and I'm sure you can be, then you must choose a time and place were you can devote your entire concentration to the work, even if you have to do it in the middle of the night.

I wish you every success. The essay was good.

Kitosdad.
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