Paragraph: What is a good citizenship?

[Merocasa]

i hope all of you fine.i would like you to correct my paragraph.thanks in advance.

what is a good citizenship?

citizenship are responsible individuals,who are aware of their respnosabilities and duties towards their community,that is to say the relationship within the members of community should be based on understanding and progressed mentality,that keeps citizenship tight,as well as they should respect and abide by laws which aim to organize their life,but the authority at the same time must respect their free well and respond to their needs.

eventually, a good citienship is in which responsabilities are shared between its members and authority.

please i want to correct my paragh,give a note if neccessary,if its good or not,and give me more useul vocabularies that i can use it for this topic.thanks.

[Kitosdad]

BASIC ENGLISH.
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Every sentence starts with a CAPITAL LETTER, no matter how short the sentence may be.

Every sentence finishes with a full stop, question mark, or exclamation mark.

You refer to yourself as " I ", not " ( i ) ".

A CAPITAL letter is used for the name of every person, country,language ( Indian, French, German. ) or day of the week, month, or a holiday date ( Easter, Xmas ),a brand ( Oxo, Sprite, Coke. ) or a monument, as in Tower Bridge, Big Ben.

Merocasa, your essay is quite good, but if you submitted it as a written text you would receive a poor mark. Good in content, but poor in basic English.
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[Kitosdad]

What is good citizenship?

Citizens are responsible individuals,who are aware of their responsibilities and duties towards their community. That is to say, the relationship within the members of community should be based on an understanding and progressive mentality,that keeps citizenship tight.

Also, they should respect and abide by the laws which aim to organize their lives.

At the same time the authority must respect the individuals free will and respond to the individual citizen, and recognise their needs.

Good citizenship is one in which responsibilities are shared between its members and the authorities.

Hope you think that it sounds a little better. Kitosdad.
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[Merocasa]

Thank you mister kitosdad
Vielen dank fur die hilfe.
ubrigens.
Ich lerne deutsch, weil ich es mag.

[Kitosdad]

Merocasa, Dein Deutsch viele besser als mein ist. :lol: :lol: :lol:

Kitosdad. A pleasure to have helped you.
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