Present simple: I go to college five days a week, I go at 9 o'clock, and come...

[Hanan Q8]

hi :)

who can check my 4 articles grammers??? please.
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(present simple)
I go to college five days a week, I go at 9 o'clock, and come home at 2 o'clock, I have a break for about one hour, during the break, I stay with my friends, and we talk about our studies, how to get high marks, and help each other.

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(past simple)
10 years ago, I went to college five days a week, I went at 9 o'clock, and came home at 2 o'clock, I had a break for about one hour, during the break, I stayed with my friends, and we talked about our studies, how to get high marks, and helped ech other.

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3
(future simple)
Next year, I will go to college five days a week, I wil go at 9 o'clock, and will come home at 2 o'clock, I will have a break for about one hour, during the break, I will stay with my friends, and we will talke about our studies, how to get high marks, and will helpe ech other.

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(present perfect countinuouse)
Since 2004, I have been going to college five days a week, I have been going at 9 o'clock, and have been coming home at 2 o'clock, I have a break for about one hour, during the break, I have been staying with my friends, and we have been talking about our studies, how to get high marks, and help each other.

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[Mister Micawber]

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(present simple)
I go to college five days a week. I leave home at 9 o'clock and come back at 2 o'clock. I take a break for about one hour, and during the break I visit with my friends. We talk about our studies and how to get high marks, and we help each other.

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(past simple)
10 years ago, I went to college five days a week. I left home at 9 o'clock and came back at 2 o'clock. I took a break for about one hour, and during the break I visited with my friends. We talked about our studies and how to get high marks, and we helped each other.

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(future simple)

Next year, I'll go to college five days a week. I'll leave home at 9 o'clock and come back at 2 o'clock. I'll take a break for about one hour, and during the break I'll visit with my friends. We'll talk about our studies and how to get high marks, and we'll help each other.

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(present perfect continuous)
Since 2004, I've been going to college five days a week. I've been leaving home at 9 o'clock and coming back at 2 o'clock. I've been taking a break for about one hour, and during the break I've been visiting with my friends. We've been talking about our studies and how to get high marks, and we've been helping each other.
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[Hanan Q8]

thanks Mister Micawber for helping me and correct my articles.. :)

but i have a question.

you wrote in present simple:
"during the break I (visit) with my friends. We talk about our studies...etc."

and i wrote in present simple:
"during the break, I (stay) with my friends, and we talk about our studies...etc."

Is "i stay with my friends" is wrong? :roll:

[Mister Micawber]

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Not grammatically wrong, but 'stay with friends' normally means 'reside for a short time' with them, as at a hotel.
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