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#2 (permalink) Wed Apr 22, 2009 12:15 pm Hi, whats up |
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Using I and England would be an immediate improvement.
Essay was pretty good. Few errors, but nothing untoward. _________________ Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting. |
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Kitosdad Language Coach

Joined: 04 Mar 2009 Posts: 13417 Location: ESSEN, Germany, (but English.)
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#3 (permalink) Fri Apr 24, 2009 11:16 am Hi Kitosdad |
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Hi,
Thanks a lot for your quick reply. Good to know that you found my essay ok.Could you do me a favour? Could you please correct all the mistakes I made in my posts? As you know I am really keen to learn English.
Thanks again for your help!
Regards |
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Chandralekha New Member
Joined: 22 Apr 2009 Posts: 7
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#4 (permalink) Fri Apr 24, 2009 11:48 am Hi Kitosdad |
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No problem my friend, but keep them to a minimum if you can. :) :)
Kitosdad. _________________ Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting. |
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Kitosdad Language Coach

Joined: 04 Mar 2009 Posts: 13417 Location: ESSEN, Germany, (but English.)
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#5 (permalink) Fri Apr 24, 2009 13:20 pm Hi Kitosdad |
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| Chandralekha wrote: |
Hi,
Thanks a lot for your quick reply. Good to know that you found my essay ok.Could you do me a favour? Could you please correct all the mistakes I made in my posts? As you know I am really keen to learn English.
Thanks again for your help!
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Hi Chandralekha,
You can correct many of your mistakes yourself if you manage to change some of your writing and typing habits. For more information, please read How can I improve my writing skills?
Many thanks, Torsten
TOEIC listening, question-response: How much do you charge per hour? |
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Torsten Learning Coach

Joined: 25 Sep 2003 Posts: 14503 Location: EU
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#6 (permalink) Fri Apr 24, 2009 14:00 pm Hi Kitosdad |
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Chandralekha my friend, as Torsten has already pointed out; Good habits take the same developing as bad habits. Your English is pretty good. Just remember ( i ) and E, and your work will already begin to look a darned sight better.
Take care. Kitosdad. _________________ Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting. |
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Kitosdad Language Coach

Joined: 04 Mar 2009 Posts: 13417 Location: ESSEN, Germany, (but English.)
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#7 (permalink) Fri Apr 24, 2009 14:31 pm HI |
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Hi Chandralekha, I am also from india... how are you?
Just i would like to introduce myself to this forum. really we have to thank for having such a forum to improve english. what ever doubts we have, we can post it and get solutions from different peoples from all over the world. so thru that we can learn more also.
i am also trying to improve my english... Can anyone tell me how to improve english knowledge? i mean that... in what way to practice gaining more vocabulary and improving written english.
Thanks, Sarves. |
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Sarveswaran New Member
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