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TOEFLŪ essay: One should never judge a person by external appearances.



 
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TOEFL essay: One should never judge a person by external appearances. #1 (permalink) Thu Apr 23, 2009 11:21 am   TOEFL essay: One should never judge a person by external appearances.
 

One should never judge a person by external appearances. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Although most people think first appearances counts or are very important i do not agree to that because
our external appearances cant determine who we truelly are.
the fact that a person can look good physically doesnt also imply that he or she is a good person in the inside too.
most times the people we proclaim beautiful sometimes turn out to be the worst people we can ever encounter.
theres a saying that we shouldn't judge a book by its cover and i strongly i believe in that.

i think we can comment or judge someone only by knowing him or her by his or her character since a person has to be good by the
way he or she behaves towards other people.just to express an episode i witness not long ago i met a person who was very good looking
and i thought he was going to be a nice person just beacuse he's good looking but then as time went on i realized he's not as good
as i assumed.

if a person has nice eyes,nose,lips or smile doesn't automatically implicates that he or she has got a good heart or is polite,
the same way if someone isn't good looking shouldn't imply he or she is a bad person.

Maybe first apperances may count but they do not determine a person inner being or character.

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CAN SOMEONE PLEASE CORRECT MY ESSAY? #2 (permalink) Thu Apr 23, 2009 12:17 pm   CAN SOMEONE PLEASE CORRECT MY ESSAY?
 

Not bad Bernice, but whatever happened to your Capital letters when starting your sentences, and why do you persist in using " i " instead of " I ".?

Lazy, or forgetful.?

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CAN SOMEONE PLEASE CORRECT MY ESSAY? #3 (permalink) Thu Apr 23, 2009 17:59 pm   CAN SOMEONE PLEASE CORRECT MY ESSAY?
 

yeah i'm lazy but i'll do it better next time
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