TOEFL® essay: Some countries allow their students to do jobs as teenager

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Do you agree or disagree with the statement” some countries allow their students to do jobs as teenager. (any one who have ideas about this issue can share at here)

Many countries in the world have allowed their teenagers to have jobs while they are still students. Even some people show their perception that students can’t have enough time to do jobs and this will result in these student study decreased naturally. However, I totally think that part-time jobs may offer students a lot of benefits as following.

At the first glance, we have to claim many useful advantages that jobs convey to teenager. Schools can only give their students knowledge but can not teach them how to do it theirselve. A part time job can do this that a student encouragely learn effectively in marketing,which thanks to its practical problems, when serving at a pizza store. Futhermore, while listening to other staff’s advises, they not only extend their mind with many new things and but also reserve helpful experience for their bright future.

Secondly, They can get money from doing jobs. A huge number of students do not want to take money from their parent but jobs can give them money to pay for their own demands such as cell-phones, computer,etc. Moreover, because of studying in a universty costs a big amount of money and jobs can help students to save money for their futher study. For example,I can work 3 hours per day at a tea shop which equals to 15 dollars. At the result, I can have money to go out with my friends like cinema, football match or purchasing my new shirts…

To sum up, I again convincingly think that students had better have their jobs as teenager.Knowledge always paralels with reality so it is obviously that the more students can control their both work and studying, the better they can touch in the future.