Could you check out me question for audiences during a formal speech?

[Maggie]

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Hi everyone,

The speech topic is about what I expect for a flower exhibition.

Now please allow me to ask you guys a question?
1. Which countries have you been to?
2. Please allow me to ask you one more question.
3. When you went to Canada, could you communicate with the local people very well?
4. Thanks for sharing this great experience for us.
5.So what I expect about this exhibition the Second one is ,

6. one can get to the exhibitions easily.

Please see my scenario is okay or not for a speech that I ask some questions for audiences.

If you guys don't understand what I mean, please tell me directly. Thanks.

Thanks a lot.
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[Mister Micawber]

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Hi everyone,

My speech topic is 'What I expect of/in/at a flower exhibition'.

I would like to ask you some questions:

1. Which countries have you been to?
3. When you went to Canada, could you communicate very well?
4. Thanks for sharing this great experience with us.
5.The second thing I expect of/in/at this exhibition is...
6. One can get to the exhibition easily.

Please check whether my scenario for a speech, in which I ask the audience some questions, is okay or not.

If you don't understand what I mean, please ask me to clarify. Thanks.
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