TOEFL® essay: Some people think the advantages of international tourism outweigh

[Steven1815]

In this day and age, it is commonly deemed that international tourism plays a pivotal role, which bestowed marked benefits upon busy white-collar workers. However, some are showing the concern to this issue, finding that traveling abroad may be a touchy issue. This essay will display further discussion on this topic with exemplifications on both views.

In the first place, compared with domestic trip, international tourism is far more interesting. Specifically, tourists are more likely to communicate with people from diverse places, and from which gets familiar with different culture. Furthermore, traveling abroad enables to relax one’s body and ease one’s mind from the busy world. It is not an exaggeration to say that even living alone for a short period of time is a luxurious enjoyment for the white-collar; therefore, they do need scarcity spare time to alleviate their pressure at work. Lastly, international tourism can broaden individuals’ horizons.

Nonetheless, as an old saying goes;” every rose has its thorn.”- International tourism may result in unexpected problems. To begin with, vast touring population may undermine the local ecology balance. For instance, in China, due to the fact that authorities overexploit tourist attractions, a host of endangered spices, including Pandas, lose the home that they rely for existence. Moreover, the influx of tourists may play a chilly effect upon the lives of many local inhabitants. Obviously, tourism is a manifestation of human desire for variety and exploration. As a consequence, some snooping on the part of international tourists is inevitable, which may in turn render local residents apprehensive.

In the final analysis, I contend that international tourism may create drawbacks. However, it is questionable that the pros it produces far outweigh its cons. On balance, I am convinced that while promoting international tourism, coordination between individual and eco-system, tourists and local residents should be strongly recommended, perhaps we can achieve better sustainable tourism.

[Steven1815]

well, even though it is an IELTS writing practice, can someone help me with my eassy?
how is the eassy?

[Kitosdad]

Pretty good Steven, pretty good.
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[Steven1815]

danke!