is THE way i wrote this email correct?

[Merocasa]

hello brother ABD ILAH

i wish you are fine, i miss you all,i told you last week that i would come to see you but am very sorry since i have some important buisness to do,but am still keeping my word.i will come to see you all on monday.send my best wishes to our friedns

[Kitosdad]

Mercosa, hello again. You still appear to be ignoring the guidelines in Basic English.
Your e-mail is OK, but really could be much better. Please take note of the correct way to write it. :-

Hello Brother Abd Ilah, I hope you are fine. I do miss you all.

I told you last week that I would come to see you, but I'm very sorry that I did not do so, as I had some important business to attend to. However, I do intend to keep my word, and I will come to see you all on Monday.

Please send my best wishes to all of our friends.

Mercosa.
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[Merocasa]

thank you sir but when I wrote this email I meant future that is to say I'm not going to see them tomorow as i have some staff to do.Iam waiting for your correction.
Ich brauche deiner hilfe,Ich will mein Englisch bessern,glaubst du: Ich studiere Englisch schoon 6 jahre,trotzdem kann ICH haufig ein richtige satz shcreiben.
vielen dank.

[Kitosdad]

Good morning Merocasa, a very small alteration is all that is required, as below.

" I told you last week that I would come to see you, but I'm very sorry that I did not do so, as I had some important business to attend to. However, I do intend to keep my word, and I will come to see you all on as soon as I am able."

Kitosdad.

Merocasa, your German is far better than mine. I too find it difficult to form correct sentences. Learning is an ongoing thing. We learn forever.
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[Hyperquestrhey]

Dear Margie,

How are you doing?I hope you are fine.

I will soon return to dubai. Kindly advise me if I should give my resignation letter when I get there or I must wait for your further instruction.

thanks and regards,