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#1 (permalink) Thu May 21, 2009 15:22 pm Some people prefer to work in groups on projects, while other people prefer to... |
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Some people prefer to work in groups on projects, while other people prefer to work alone. What are the advantages of each, and which do you prefer? Use details and examples to support your response.
I would say, work in groups on projects or work alone, both have their advantages. It depends on person, in which environment he feels good to complete his work. I am a kind of person who would prefer to do work in groups on projects. There are many reasons for that. These are as follows.
If we work in groups, the work load is distributed among the members of the team. The work load does not come on one shoulder. Every body has a chance to choose a work according to their skills. For example, we have a project on science. Some people have skills on writing; some have good experimental hand while others have skills on presentation. So, with the help of all team members science project get success. The people who work in groups have many ideas to present the things. In team work, when team does not get success, then blame does not come on one person. In team work, every body is responsible for failure. In team work every body has to adjust him self according to others. So people can get the habit of adjustment.
On the other hand, we do a project alone. In this case the success goes to the right person. Who did all efforts. If a person does alone any project, he can manage his work according to his conveniences. In group project, every body wants to put his idea. So sometimes they get confused. In this case project can be delay. While in the case, a person does his work alone, no chance of confusion so work will be done in time. Person can present freely his idea.
Finally, I would like to say, whether you do your work in groups or alone, it does not matter. What matter is whether you get success or not. So choose an environment where you feel good. |
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#2 (permalink) Fri May 22, 2009 15:21 pm Some people prefer to work in groups on projects, while other people prefer to... |
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Please can anybody check my essay. I have submitted this essay yesterday. This is second time. I would be highly thankful if some body will checked it. |
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Gurramrashmi I'm new here and I like it ;-)
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#3 (permalink) Sat May 23, 2009 3:56 am Some people prefer to work in groups on projects, while other people prefer t |
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Some people prefer to work in groups on projects, while other people prefer to work alone. What are the advantages of each, and which do you prefer? Use details and examples to support your response.
I would say, work in groups on projects or work alone, both have their advantages.(Already been stated. ) It depends on (the) person, in which (the)environment (in which)he feels (comfortable )good to complete his work. I am a (the)kind of person who would prefer to do work in groups on projects. There are many reasons for that. These are as follows.
If we work in groups, the work load is distributed among the members of the team. The work load (responsibility)does not (rest on any one person)come on one shoulder. Everybody has a chance to choose a (to)work according to their skills.
For example, we have a project on science. Some people have skills on(in) writing; some have good experimental hands while others have skills on(in) presentation. So, with the help of all team members (the)science project get (is a)success. The people who work in groups have many (different)ideas to present the things. In team work, when (the) team does not (achieve)get success, then (the)blame does not come on one person. In team work, everybody is responsible for (the)failure. In team work every single personbody has to (integrate)adjust himself according to others. So people can (adopt)get the habit of (working with others)adjustment.
On the other hand, we (can)do a project alone. In this case the success goes to the right person. (He/She)who (made)did all (of the)effort. If a person (works)does alone (on)any project, he can manage his work according to his convenience. In group project, every body wants to put his idea. So sometimes they get confused. In this case (the) project can be delayed. While in the case(of) a person (working)does his work alone, (there is less)no chance of confusion, so (the)work will be done in time. Person can present freely his idea. ( The person is free to present his own ideas.)
Finally, I would like to say, whether you do your work in groups or alone, it does not matter. What matters is whether you (are successful)get success or not. So choose an environment where you feel good.
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#4 (permalink) Sat May 23, 2009 15:17 pm Some people prefer to work in groups on projects, while other people prefer to... |
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Hi Kitosdas Thanks for your efforts. Please can you let me know, how many marks I will got for the writing. Rashmi |
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Gurramrashmi I'm new here and I like it ;-)
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#5 (permalink) Sat May 23, 2009 19:03 pm Some people prefer to work in groups on projects, while other people prefer to... |
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Hello Rashmi, I really have no idea as I am not a teacher, nor am I an examiner.
I would say that it was not a very long essay, and I think marks are deducted for a short essay.Nevertheless, it was pretty good, in my opinion.
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