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#2 (permalink) Tue Jul 26, 2005 6:48 am A grammar problem |
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. Sorry, CG, but the original is right and yours is wrong-- but if you change your 'in' to 'in that', you will have formed a nice alternative way of expressing the original:
'Today's political candidates may reach wide audiences by appearing on television, but old-fashioned barnstorming still has value (because / in that) it allows the electorate to meet candidates face to face.'
As to why the original is correct-- 'because' is a common subordinating conjunction serving its purpose (expressing reason) appropriately here-- and that's really all there is to it:
'Barnstorming has value because it allows intimacy.' 'Oreos are good because they contain lots of sugar.' 'I like you because you are cute.'
('In that' will work in these examples too, but 'because' is much the commoner conjunction.)
(PS: Oh, and I forgot to mention that your subject line should read 'a' not 'an' grammar problem.) . _________________ Native English teacher at Mister Micawber's |
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#3 (permalink) Wed Jul 27, 2005 9:25 am A grammar problem |
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Thank you,Mister Micawber. But can I say: Today's political candidates may reach wide audiences by appearing on television, but old-fashioned barnstorming still has value in allowing the electorate to meet candidates face to face? |
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#4 (permalink) Wed Jul 27, 2005 13:43 pm A grammar problem |
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. That sounds OK to me, CG. . _________________ Native English teacher at Mister Micawber's |
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