How to write? - I require you obediently to instruct the director to fulfill...

[Ganesh]

Dear Teacher
If I want to request a Director in a respectful or politely. Can I write like in a following way ?

1. I require you obediently to instruct the director to fulfill my request
2. I request you very politely to instruct the director to fulfill my request

OR

Please feedback me how to write the above in a correct way

Ganesh

[Kitosdad]

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Hello Ganesh my old friend. Well, you have really stumped me with this one. Who exactly are you writing this request to? Obviously not the Director himself -- his secretary?

Kitos.
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[Ganesh]

Dear Teacher
If I want to request a Director or Secratary in a respectful or politely. Can I write like in a following way ?

1. I require you obediently to instruct the director to fulfill my request
2. I request you very politely to instruct the director to fulfill my request

OR

Please feedback me how to write the above in a correct way

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Ganesh

[Gray]

Hi, I am not a teacher but may I know what the context is? It appears that you want to request something from someone. But the sentences you have given sound confusing. It would really be helpful if you clear that up. Could you please answer these first:

1) What do you want to request?
2) To whom you want to request?
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[Shyone]

Ganesh,

please remember to post in the proper forum.

This forum is reserved for newcomers to introduce themselves.
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