My writings: She hid her pain under her smile...

[Basmamostafa]

[Basmamostafa]

Hello everyone,

I would love to know what everyone thinks.

Thanks,
Basma.

[Rosalisa]

Hello Basma,

Wanna know what I think?? It's, you're a great young writer, if you ask me!
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[ForOneSucks]

Very nice.

How did you get the job? What's your audience?

[Basmamostafa]

Hey,

Thanks a lot. I' glad you liked them.
Foronesucks, It's not technically a job, I am only an intern. The audience includes teens.

Thanks,
Basma.

[Stew.t.]

Hi Basma

Some great potential here, be careful with just placing your poetry on the net as images can be easily copied, even within a closed membership forum.

I think for your target audience this poetry has a very high appeal.
The repetition of the opening words to the sentences is a long tradition that goes way back. And one I used for one of my published poems
back in the day , when my youth was a reality and not just in my heart.

The phrase to "give your feelings" connects with giving of oneself, giving sth away and was the msg I got from the poem.

Rock on, and don´t let anyone stop you in expressing what you want to reveal or think is important to anyone, even if just for your own self development.
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