Homework: An activity that's supposed to be the most activities I like...

[Nattida]

Sorry to post this again. =)
I would like you to correct it. I'm quite not confident.
This is my homework, talking about an activity that you do in free time in front of the class tomorrow.

An activity that's supposed to be the most activities I like is planting.Maybe it's because my mom and dad like planting. Really, I prefer to go around and see plants or flowers, while my parents grow them. However, I sometimes help them water the plants. Once I’ve planted spinach and a gourd. And a few days later all of them died but gourds. They grew and grew and then they climbed along the fence. At last, the fence is covered with full-grown gourds. Nevertheless, I love to see them bearing fruit although I can see only their leaves right now.

Oh, I'm so embarrased =)
Thank you

[Kitosdad]

Good morning Nattida. A nice little topic that you have chosen.

The activity that I enjoy the most is gardening. I love to plant things in our garden

Maybe it's because my mom and dad like gardening too. Really, I prefer to go around and see the plants and flowers while my parents concentrate on growing them. However, I sometimes help them to water the plants.

Once I planted some spinach and a gourd, and a few days later all of them except the gourds had withered and died. They grew and grew and then they climbed along the fence. At last, the fence is covered with my full-grown gourds. Nevertheless, I love to see them bearing fruit, although at the moment I can see only their leaves

Oh, I'm so embarrased =) Why? You should be delighted with your short essay. It was very nice to read it.

Kitos.
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[Gray]

A very beautiful read indeed. Thanks.

It led me recollect my childhood days. I used to spend hours with the plants and flowers. Spending time with them and seeing them flourish was the most creative feeling I ever got. Alas, I have left that far behind but the image of that seed coming to life is still with me - deep inside.
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[Nattida]

Thanks for your help!
:D