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#1 (permalink) Sat May 30, 2009 20:24 pm Paragraph: Buying a new car takes thoughtful planning and a bunch of steps. |
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Buying a new car
Buying a new car takes thoughtful planning and a bunch of steps.
First, consumer must decide whether they want to buy a new car or used car. Once, consumer decide
to buy a new car, he or she should do some consumer research on it first.
Many consumer magazines and the Internet will rank new cars for consumer in terms of price,
safety, and value. Consumer should choose right model which suit his or her lifestyle and personality.
Moreover, consumer must pay attention to the miles per gallon the car gets. The next step is to
checkout different dealerships that sell the make and models that consumer want to buy, sometimes
their prices
and their trade-in deals are better. New car buyers can also ask their family members and friends
about the car they are considering. Sometimes they have valuable opinions and know personally
about the car, its strengths, and the problems other people have had with it. Final step is to think
ahead to the best time of year to buy. The price of many new cars drops in the fall when companies’
start announcing the new models for the upcoming year. There’s nothing wrong with the car, but
dealerships want to clear out the inventory to make room for new models.
In conclusion, when buying a new car, consumer have to researched in depth above discussed
steps that can help them to select the right new car that provide them with many years of reliable
transportation. |
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Paresh New Member
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#2 (permalink) Sun May 31, 2009 11:34 am Can anyone check grammer and spelling for my paragraph , please? |
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Buying a new car.
Buying a new car takes careful planning and a lot of thought.
First, the buyer must decide whether they want to buy a new car or a used car.
Once the potential buyer has decided to buy a new car, then he or she should do some consumer research on it first.
Many consumer magazines and the Internet sites will rank new cars for consumers in terms of price, safety, and value. Consumers should choose the model which suits his or her lifestyle and personality.
Moreover, consumers must pay attention to the miles per gallon the car achieves. The next step is to checkout the different dealerships that sell the make and models that the consumer want to buy. Sometimes their prices and their trade-in deals are better. New car buyers can also ask their family members and friends about the car they are considering. Sometimes they have valuable opinions and know personally about the car, its strengths, and the problems other people have had with it.
The final step is to think ahead to the best time of year to buy. The price of many new cars drop in the fall when companies start announcing the new models for the coming year. There’s nothing wrong with the car, but dealerships usually want to clear out the inventory to make room for new models.
In conclusion, when buying a new car, consumers have to research in depth all of the items outlined above.
These are the steps that can help them to select the right new car, which will provide them with many years of reliable transportation.
Kitosdad.[/i] _________________ Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting. |
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#3 (permalink) Sun May 31, 2009 14:43 pm Paragraph: Buying a new car takes thoughtful planning and a bunch of steps. |
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Dear Kitosdad, Thanks , a lot for your quick and useful help in my english language study. I rally appreciate you. Hope, that you will help me in future too. Thanks, again.
with regards,
paresh |
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Paresh New Member
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#4 (permalink) Sun May 31, 2009 15:47 pm Paragraph: Buying a new car takes thoughtful planning and a bunch of steps. |
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Paresh. No problem. Any time at all.
Kitos. _________________ Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting. |
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