Proofread this TOEFL® essay: Advantages and disadvantages of internet.

[SkiIucK]

This, I believe, is because people tend to play on-line games, use Skype (and IRC before). Nobody cares about spelling, grammar and punctuation there, so they're like: 'Hey, what the hell! Couldn't care less...'

When I actually still played on-line games, folks there would question me quizzically why I typed like this and awkward periods of time would occur.

So, If I were you, I wouldn't judge them. It's simply the spirit of today. ;) Yes, it's a mockery with your labour, but... I don't know.

Kindest regards.

[Milanya]

[Rfaleet]

SkiIucK

Give your smile to veryone ,but give your heart to only one.
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Give your smile to everyone but give your heart to only one

[Rfaleet]

Milanya,

I don't know Your name .

Change this sentence into passive .

And lets start a game .
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Give your smile to everyone but give your heart to only one

[Myzery]

Whoa calm down buddy, don't get yourself all worked up.

[Milanya]

[Rfaleet]

[quote="Milanya"]

[Milanya]

Your name is not known by me. (This usage is very unusual.)
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con·text - The part of a text or statement that surrounds a particular word or passage and determines its meaning.

[Jamie (K)]

[Rfaleet]

[Rfaleet]

[Kitosdad]

PYUK.

The internet is considered to be one of the more important means of communications, although the telephone is considered to be faster. The internet is used in the workplace , school ,university and in the home too.

An additional advantage of internet is you can send email, chat with your friends and family and people at work. You can meet people from other places too. Furthermore, you can find a lot of information. You can read news from around the world, search work, and download music and videos.

However, you can meet bad people too. Children arelured to view inappropriate pages. For example, pages containing pornography. You can become addicted to the internet and you can download viruses to your computer, also it is very expensive.

Finally, the internet offers you advantages and disadvantages. People must learn to use it correctly , taking advantage of the benefits that it offers.
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Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting.

[Salotamta]

there are so many advantages and disadvantages of internet. advantages of internet is that we can chat, make new friends, have a contact with people who are far from us

[Salotamta]

there are so many advantages and disadvantegs of internet, but it is common sense that internet has many advantages than disadvanteges, for example by internet we can have contac with our relation, we can make new friends and simply we can get news. it is bad that there are so many bad programs for children that influense on their behaivor. computer influence on their healthe and they become not imagination.