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Proofread this TOEFL essay: Advantages and disadvantages of internet. #16 (permalink) Mon Jun 01, 2009 20:18 pm   Proofread this TOEFL essay: Advantages and disadvantages of internet.
 

This, I believe, is because people tend to play on-line games, use Skype (and IRC before). Nobody cares about spelling, grammar and punctuation there, so they're like: 'Hey, what the hell! Couldn't care less...'

When I actually still played on-line games, folks there would question me quizzically why I typed like this and awkward periods of time would occur.

So, If I were you, I wouldn't judge them. It's simply the spirit of today. Wink Yes, it's a mockery with your labour, but... I don't know.

Kindest regards.
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Proofread this TOEFL essay: Advantages and disadvantages of internet. #17 (permalink) Mon Jun 01, 2009 20:19 pm   Proofread this TOEFL essay: Advantages and disadvantages of internet.
 

Rfaleet wrote:
Stop that and explain .

1. The first word of a sentence starts with a capital letter.
2. A sentence ends with a period (full stop) not with a comma.
3. At the end of a question there should be a question mark.
4. You is NOT spelled u.
5. Are is NOT spelled r.
6. I ( the nominative singular pronoun, used by a speaker in referring to himself or herself) is spelled with a capital letter I.
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Proofread this TOEFL essay: Advantages and disadvantages of internet. #18 (permalink) Mon Jun 01, 2009 20:52 pm   Proofread this TOEFL essay: Advantages and disadvantages of internet.
 

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Proofread this TOEFL essay: Advantages and disadvantages of internet. #19 (permalink) Mon Jun 01, 2009 20:54 pm   Proofread this TOEFL essay: Advantages and disadvantages of internet.
 

Milanya,

I don't know Your name .

Change this sentence into passive .

And lets start a game .
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Proofread this TOEFL essay: Advantages and disadvantages of internet. #20 (permalink) Mon Jun 01, 2009 21:21 pm   Proofread this TOEFL essay: Advantages and disadvantages of internet.
 

Whoa calm down buddy, don't get yourself all worked up.
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Proofread this TOEFL essay: Advantages and disadvantages of internet. #21 (permalink) Mon Jun 01, 2009 21:30 pm   Proofread this TOEFL essay: Advantages and disadvantages of internet.
 

Rfaleet wrote:
Milanya,
I don't know your name.
Change this sentence into passive.
And let's start a game.

I am not quite sure I understand what you are talking about.

1. My name is Milanya.
2. What sentence?
3. What game?

(No space is needed between a word and a period.)
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Proofread this TOEFL essay: Advantages and disadvantages of internet. #22 (permalink) Mon Jun 01, 2009 21:36 pm   Proofread this TOEFL essay: Advantages and disadvantages of internet.
 

[quote="Milanya"]
Rfaleet wrote:
Milanya,

1. My name is Milanya.
2. What sentence?
3. What game?

(No space is needed between a word and a period.)


Welcome Milanya,

I ask you question and you asnwer it. Then, you ask me question .

I am happy when you indicate where my mistakes are .
Let's start with my question

Change into passive

I don't know your name.
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Proofread this TOEFL essay: Advantages and disadvantages of internet. #23 (permalink) Mon Jun 01, 2009 21:52 pm   Proofread this TOEFL essay: Advantages and disadvantages of internet.
 

Your name is not known by me. (This usage is very unusual.)
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Proofread this TOEFL essay: Advantages and disadvantages of internet. #24 (permalink) Mon Jun 01, 2009 21:53 pm   Proofread this TOEFL essay: Advantages and disadvantages of internet.
 

Rfaleet wrote:
I don't understand what do u mean .

Stop that and explain .

There is no word "u" in English, only the words "you" and "ewe".

You are not supposed to put spaces before commas, full stops or any type of punctuation.
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Proofread this TOEFL essay: Advantages and disadvantages of internet. #25 (permalink) Mon Jun 01, 2009 22:12 pm   Proofread this TOEFL essay: Advantages and disadvantages of internet.
 

Milanya wrote:
Your name is not known by me. (This usage is very unusual.)


Well-done my friend.
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Proofread this TOEFL essay: Advantages and disadvantages of internet. #26 (permalink) Mon Jun 01, 2009 22:23 pm   Proofread this TOEFL essay: Advantages and disadvantages of internet.
 

Jamie (K) wrote:
Rfaleet wrote:
I don't understand what do u mean .

Stop that and explain .

There is no word "u" in English, only the words "you" and "ewe".

You are not supposed to put spaces before commas, full stops or any type of punctuation.


I have to take care of every letter.
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Proofread this TOEFL essay: Advantages and disadvantages of internet. #27 (permalink) Tue Jun 02, 2009 13:11 pm   Proofread this TOEFL essay: Advantages and disadvantages of internet.
 

PYUK.

The internet is considered to be one of the more important means of communications, although the telephone is considered to be faster. The internet is used in the workplace , school ,university and in the home too.

An additional advantage of internet is you can send email, chat with your friends and family and people at work. You can meet people from other places too. Furthermore, you can find a lot of information. You can read news from around the world, search work, and download music and videos.

However, you can meet bad people too. Children arelured to view inappropriate pages. For example, pages containing pornography. You can become addicted to the internet and you can download viruses to your computer, also it is very expensive.

Finally, the internet offers you advantages and disadvantages. People must learn to use it correctly , taking advantage of the benefits that it offers.
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Proofread this TOEFL essay: Advantages and disadvantages of internet. #28 (permalink) Tue Sep 08, 2009 15:17 pm   Proofread this TOEFL essay: Advantages and disadvantages of internet.
 

there are so many advantages and disadvantages of internet. advantages of internet is that we can chat, make new friends, have a contact with people who are far from us
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Proofread this TOEFL essay: Advantages and disadvantages of internet. #29 (permalink) Tue Sep 08, 2009 15:21 pm   Proofread this TOEFL essay: Advantages and disadvantages of internet.
 

there are so many advantages and disadvantegs of internet, but it is common sense that internet has many advantages than disadvanteges, for example by internet we can have contac with our relation, we can make new friends and simply we can get news. it is bad that there are so many bad programs for children that influense on their behaivor. computer influence on their healthe and they become not imagination.
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