Letter: Dear Dr Sarooj, With regard to our earlier conversation in Greece...

[Maleki]

is the following letter correct?

[Mister Micawber]

Dear Dr Sarooj,

With regard to our earlier conversation in Greece about the company which manufactures wiring duct manufacturing equipment, could you please send us the company information and technical specifications for the equipment? Also, please give us contact information for any client companies which are currently operating that equipment, because we need to contact them regarding their experiences and testimonials in using it.
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Native English teacher at Mister Micawber's

[Maleki]

Thanks a lot for your help