TOEFL® essay sample: Has TV destroyed communication?

[Eisazadeh]

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Television has destroyed communications between friends and family.
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Nowadays, television has become a necessity of people' life, and it is seen in anyone's house. In my opinion, although television induces to disperse news all over the world, but there are obviously some disadvantages regarding watching television. I will try to explain below some disadvantages of watching television.

There is no doubt that TV has a lot of advantages. For example people can find the newest news from TV. Nowadays, each TV channel spread the news through news programs, so people will be aware what is happening in their country and even all over world. But from my point of view, TV cause people do not communicate among friend and families similar to the past time because they prefer filling their time by watching TV at home.

In addition to decreasing communication among people caused by TV, television induce people to be lazy and not do exercise because there are a lot of programs which people are very interested to watch those. People are always eager to sit in front of TV and waste their time. It cause that people always spend their time in home, neither play game, nor walk around with their friends. For instantly, when I was a child, my family did not have TV. I was always outside and playing football and other games with my friend. It prompted me to have a strong body.

In conclusion, although TV is needed for news and also documentary movie, but it has disadvantages that cause to people not have good communication with their friend than the past time. In my opinion, if people want to watch to TV they sure have to lay out a plan for watching TV whereby they will save their time and could have their communication with their friends.

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[Eisazadeh]

Hi
My essay about attending class is below. Glad to hear comments from you.
Thanks in advance
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Should university students be required to attend classes?
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The past time, student were obliged to attend classes, if they were absent or even they occasionally did not go to classes, their courses were dropped due to not attending classes regularly. Whereas these days university and high education has evolved widely throughout the world and new type of education has emerged progressively; some of them admit students provided on they surely attend classes, while some university train students via internet and books that they offer to their student. In my opinion, both of them have some advantages.

If students be allowed to not attend classes, they will have more time to study in their home because they will not waste their time to go university. In addition, learning out of class means self control, for example, some student prefer to drink or maybe to eat something while they are studying, in this case they are capable to do what they want during studying.

From my point of view, attending classes has also advantages that some students prefer to join in classes. One reason is that students will benefit from seminar that their classmate or maybe a guest from another university will present in their class and the opportunity is provided for student to ask the vague parts of courses and improving the conception of topics. Another advantage is that sometimes teacher , depend on type of course, will divide classes to small group for discussing that is concession for student because they learn group working.

All in all, from what I have been discussed above, I suggest student should be given the opportunity for the rights of making their own decisions for attending classes. In my opinion, attending to the class as optional brings more advantages for student.

[Kitosdad]

In the past students were obliged to attend classes. If they were absent or even if they occasionally did not go to classes, their courses were dropped due to their not attending, whereas these days university and higher education has evolved widely throughout the world, and a new type of education system has progressively emerged . Some of the universities admit students with the proviso that they regularly attend classes, while some universities train students via the internet and with books that they offer to their students. In my opinion, both of these arrangements have advantages.

If students be allowed to not attend classes, they will have more time to study in their homes because they will not be wasting time in travelling to the university.
In addition, learning out of class means self control, for example, some students prefer to drink or maybe to eat something whilst they are studying, and in this case they are able to do what they want whilst studying at home.

From my point of view, attending classes offers advantages that some students prefer. One reason is that many students will benefit from seminars that their classmates or maybe a guest from another university will present in their class, and the opportunity is provided for students to ask questions about the vague parts of courses, and in doing so they improve their conception of the topics under discussion.

Another advantage is that sometimes the teacher, depending on the type of course, will divide classes into smaller groups. That is a concession for students, because they learn more working as a group.

All in all, from what I have outlined above, I suggest students should be given the right to make their own decisions regarding attending classes. In my opinion, whether to attend class is an option which brings more advantages for the students.
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