TOEFL® essay: The most creative person I know.

[Happytofita]

Hello,

This is the first time I share my writing. The things I write are like my kids. They mean a lot to me.

The name of the most creative person I know is "Human". Human is very creative with generating new worries that are, most of the time, well-nigh impossible to happen. He can always come up with a chain of worries to spend the time fretting over. Whenever he takes a new step forward, instead of starting with a positive frame of mind, he starts applying his creativity to go two steps back.

The aforesaid creativity hinders the development of Human’s forward-looking process. When one is attached to his burdens more than they are attached to him, one would fail. In the case of Human, he does not only dwell on his worries, but he creates new ones. Therefore, he does not only think about today’s worries, but about tomorrow’s ones as well. His future plans are at stake because of this sort of creativity.

As far as I am concerned, I used to be as creative as Human. But I have come to the conclusion that this type of creativity is not in the best of my interests. When I create new worries and add them to the ones I already have, the load becomes unbearable. I hope that Human will stop exercising his mind, and realize that creativity can be used otherwise not only in creating worries we suffer from more in imagination than in reality.

Mouhcine
: o)

[SkiIucK]

Hey, I liked it.

[Happytofita]

Thank you.