TOEFL® essay samples: Love and humanity

[Aks9454]

In today's fast track world where, everyone is running behind success,money,fame and fortune one thing which keeps on missing in all most everyone is "HUMANITY". People forget that there are lot more important things in world apart from money. According to me money is not the life it's just a part of the life which plays a important role up to a certain extent but what matter's more in life is the golden four letter word that is "LOVE". The meaning of this four letter's is slowly getting extinct from every one's life. Why can't people understand each other and form a different world where there is no fear, no agony and no pain. Today people are jeopardizing their relationships just for silly reason's and later when they are really in need of that relationship all they are left with is regrets. I would like to plead every one that please stop harming your brother's and adopt humanity.Start loving each other so that we can all establish a better world to leave.

Hope you people would like my short essay and help me out with my mistakes.

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[Kitosdad]

In today's fast track world where everyone is running behind success,money,fame and fortune, one thing which (everyone)keeps on missing is "HUMANITY". People forget that there are lot more important things in (the)world (besides) money.

According to me money is not the life it's just a part of the life which plays a(n) important role up to a certain extent, but what matters more in life is the golden four letter word, "LOVE".
The meaning of (these) four letters is slowly(becoming)extinct (in) everyone's life.
Why can't people understand each other and (create) a different world where there is no fear, no agony and no pain.
Today people are jeopardizing their relationships just for silly reasons, and later, when they are really in need of that relationship, all they (will be) left with is regrets.
I would like to plead (with)everyone that (you)please stop harming your brother's and adopt humanity.
Start loving each other so that we can all establish a better world to leave for the future.

Kitosdad.
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[Yemen1]

Hi Fatina;
I think i can help and guide you to improve your langauge.
Mohammed

[Aks9454]

Hi kitosdad ,
Thanks for correcting my mistakes.Hope I will receive similar response from you.
Have a nice day...
BYE!!!